Jolly Good
It was not bad I thought it was quite good theres a few improvment you need too work on but other than that you did a great job.
Reviews for "lll_Narnia's Realm_lll"
alexsmolik responds:
Thanks, glad you liked it !
Yeah, the movies has its good points and its bad points. For me, good points being music and graphics, bad point being little bugs and synch problems!
Thanks for the review.
Alex
Weee
Not the worlds best graphics, and it needs some fixes, but, overall, i worked out pretty good...
I'm looking forward to part 2 :D
alexsmolik responds:
Thanks, glad you rather liked it.
Yeah, it might not be the best graphics, but I did my best for sure and I have no regrets. Yeah it has a few bugs here and there such as LIP SYNCHING ! :(
Part 2 may be just a dream ...
Thanks for the review.
Alex
Not Bad
Your backgrounds are great and the overall art style works for the piece. This shows a great deal of effort and it's something you can be proud of.
In your sequel, and there should definitely be one, be sure to address the following:
1) Change the name of Narnia - Unless this is based on C.S. Lewis' seven volume set of "The Chronicles of Narnia" (I didn't see any credit to him or see any hints it was the same world from his books, but I read them many years ago), I would suggest you change the name. It'd be like calling the location "Tatooine" or "Cimmeria" without any relation to Star Wars or Conan. It could also bring up copyright issues.
2) Sound synching - I watched it twice, once at medium quality as per your suggestion and once at low quality and the synching was still a bit off.
3) Voice acting - While the actor was fine, he lacked the ability to draw the viewer into the story. Use actors who evoke emotion much better.
Overall, I think you have a pretty nifty project here and I'd like to see you continue. Best of luck on future episodes!
alexsmolik responds:
Woa, huge criticism coming :)
First of all, thanks, and I'm glad you rather liked it: I did spend a lot of time on the backgrounds and art. And yes, I am rather proud of my work and have almost no regrets, except for lip synching. Thank for the infos, I'll change the names as soon as I can. I know about the sound/lip synching problem, I just don't really know how to correct that.. The person that did the voices was just a friend, nothing really professional, I just needed a voice, quick and fast so I could keep animating.
Thanks a lot for the motivation and everything, as long as for the review.
Alex
good
I liked it, however, I was rather disturbed that the elfs buttox were soo.... soooooo... ahh, nvm.
Just looks like you may have gotten a little too much into the flash while drawing it. anyhoo...
Goodjob, nice art.
alexsmolik responds:
Thanks, glad you liked it.
You were disturbed ? lol. Well, I try to make my flashes as realistic as possible. What were you doing looking at that elf buttox anyways ?! :-P
Thanks for the review.
Alex
Not too bad
There were only a few flaws in this movie. One, the text didn't keep up with what the Elf was saying near the end, that was noticeable. And two, the Elf's mouth was not in sync with what he was saying in the beginning. Other than that, this was a great movie. I liked the storyline plot and everything, and hopefully you are going to make sequels to this.
alexsmolik responds:
Thanks, glad you rather liked it.
A few flaws huh ? Well, I think there are way too many! Yeah I had a really hard time with lip synching above all. And if there ever is a sequel, I'll make sure it doesn't involve mouth movement !!! :)
Thanks for the review.
Alex