Wow, that was great!! Just a couple of things...
You're really really talented, and I liked the story. But you should try to be more clear about telling the story - ie: make the plot points and what's going on much more explicit, and flow a bit better from one to the next. For example, during the scene where the red lazer was pointed at the character's forehead I wasn't clear exactly how those characters fit into the plot, or exactly where the lazer was being aimed from. It was just a little too fast. But good job overall. and nice animations!