These Egocity movies are getting better.
Your graphics have gotten so much better and it had a slower pace than the other ego city movies but i would'nt call it boring like the last reviewer did.
I'd call this flash very nicely craft and an interesting storyline.
I can't say the movie was too short or too long it was at just the right running time. You end the flash when we begin to want more and that's what is helping to make your series into a success.
Keep making those good movies and congrates on your first portal award you have earned it.