what?
too fast paced.
Reviews for "EgoCity Chap I"
Don't Complain
I'm sick of people like you bitching about them giving you a bad rating if they do just to start off. Second I'm sick of people using the music in from the matrix in thier presentations, its getingold and drawn out. I know how hard it is to create flash I've doneit before but thats no excuse for poorly drawn characters, the rest of your art is perfectally fine, then again it's all geometric, work on your natural shapes and smoothing it out. try doing it on paper first and yes I do know that what looks good on paper dosent nessecairily look good on a diferent medium but you had to draw all thoe characters anyway so practice with it. BTW someparts were really slow moving and had no point to them beingin there. Also don't even get on me for not having any submissions here, if I had the money and time you can bet I would put something up.
When i saw the laser i just thought "Hasta la vista!"
What just happened?
Too fast. The key to great filmmaking is artistically created scenes and slow meaningful sequences, not a single blur of frenetic action flicks linked by screen effects.