nice animation
I like how nice the animation was, I didnt like the scrolling text, and i wish the story was more clear to understand. Your animation was beautiful and fluid. really becides the scrolling text i liked this
Reviews for "VENGANCE"
O.J. simson?
did he kill the wife? ne way, i liked the carachters but the way they talked sucked a long dick. fix that and it will be good. AND!!!!>>>>>>
the ninja never stood gaurd. thats the sammuri. kill them. heh.
Good
The graphics were the best part of the movie. All you need to work on is the story line. Why did the guy kill his wife? Why did the bad guy let himself be killed so easily? Oh and the "thunder" sound almost got to the point of annoying.
Getting there
Personally I think the section of the flash with landscapes and shilouettes looked fantastic, but you might have to work a little more on plot and up close animation. Speech bubbles are your friend! Otherwise, good work.
Could be improved.
Well notbad it could be improved with some more effort and detail backrounds especialy, maybe add some different view shots, i wouldnt mind seeing it abit longer aswell, anyways notbad,
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