Muhgh?
So... If your wife gets killed, jumping off a cliff is the first step to rectifying that? Strange, but not so good, try again.
Reviews for "VENGANCE"
randomj0n responds:
hes going to find the man that killed her(its on the way)
erm ... no
damn that was so old, how did the guy know exactly who did it? instantly? lol! and there was no last battle, what was the point, and wtf is "avengance" thats not a word. sorry that sucked, not enough action, just moving AS FAST AS POSSIBLE through the scenes. lol try again
randomj0n responds:
uh actualy it is its like revenge but not selfish
I shudder with disgust
You had a horrible plot. I mean it's been done to death. There was practically no animation, and the art was poor at best. Please don't submit any second-rate work on here, save these experimental pieces for yourself. There is no room in the portal for stuff like this.
randomj0n responds:
if your gonna tell me my work is crap you should atleast do something better so you can backup your opinion
wow..
angel has some issues... But at least (s?)he's origonal!
For comments, obviously it's good.. but the writing is a little annoying with all the filled in letters. Just makes it harder to read. I will give you credit for realizing that there ARE, in fact, some people out there with more than a sixth grade reading level, who don't need three minutes a word to read what's going on.. something that's always annoyed me about other flash's.
Other than that, the end was kinda a cop out I think.. very anticlimactic!
excellent job
here are my thoughts
you shouldve showed the bad guy breaking into the house and stalking the woman as she gets ready for bed then come out and kill her
like watch her take a shower hide in her closet as she dresses and goes to bed
that would make it more sinister
the graphics were outstanding
i would have had the husband stalk the bad guy thru gritty streets and abandoned warehouses and rough up some street people for information on him then find him and have the ulimate showdown and have the police think the husband did it and keep trying to arrest him and hunt him
and have the two battle each other and have the badguy kick the crap out of the husband and makes a mistake and the husband stabs him with the same knife he used to kill his wife
or another idea is the husband is stalking himself
a separate personalitty has manifested and hes chasing himself only he doesnt know it and as he chases the guy over the years
and more people get murdered by his alter ego
and he doesnt know hes actaully the killer till one day he meets him and fights him and unmasks him and realizes he is him
spooky?