Ehh...
Its Cliche, short and anti-clamatic. Ur style is pretty cool but u need to work harder if u want to gain noteriety on NG.
Ehh...
Its Cliche, short and anti-clamatic. Ur style is pretty cool but u need to work harder if u want to gain noteriety on NG.
wow..
angel has some issues... But at least (s?)he's origonal!
For comments, obviously it's good.. but the writing is a little annoying with all the filled in letters. Just makes it harder to read. I will give you credit for realizing that there ARE, in fact, some people out there with more than a sixth grade reading level, who don't need three minutes a word to read what's going on.. something that's always annoyed me about other flash's.
Other than that, the end was kinda a cop out I think.. very anticlimactic!
man that was actually pretty good
it was better than i expected but it still needs a bit more time. maybe have voice bubbles or something and see if you can have the murderer at least try to struggle or fight besides that all you need is a plot the pics were good and the killing was nice so...yeah
nice animation
I like how nice the animation was, I didnt like the scrolling text, and i wish the story was more clear to understand. Your animation was beautiful and fluid. really becides the scrolling text i liked this
Not Bad
Well, at least it's a halfway decent submission. "Avengence" isn't a word though.