not too shaby
i lkied it, it was pretty funny. what happened to the clock hands in one of the scenes. they just disapeared.
Reviews for "Don't Eat the Doughnut"
well it wasnt to smooth
you didnt need to pay close attention to see that peoples eye colors changed and that the clock hands just go away. but besides that it was fine
Kinda Boring
So-so. The graphics would be vastly improved if you outline the drawings and not make them so messy eg. The building windows at the start. Make the intro more interesting and creative instead of the plan old intro because this bored me immediately. Sorry. But good luck in your future submissions
cheshirepus responds:
Thanks, this being my second submission out of 6 or 7 so far, I've actually had quite a bit of luck with the rest! =p
Needs some work.
Well, The graphics were not totally bad but it looked more like work in progress that finished flash. And the whole "no sound" thing caused it to be a little boring. Overall it was a nice try but I couldn't sit through it all.
Ehh
Well I did like how you gave it that old fashion movie style. But I lost excitment after the few couple seconds. Sorry <=)
cheshirepus responds:
That's quite alright. This was only the second submission that I ever created to pass judgement on the Portal, and that was 8 months ago! I've learned a lot since then, but it's still nice to look back at my old movies from time to time. Thanks for being honest!