Needs some work.
Well, The graphics were not totally bad but it looked more like work in progress that finished flash. And the whole "no sound" thing caused it to be a little boring. Overall it was a nice try but I couldn't sit through it all.
Reviews for "Don't Eat the Doughnut"
I agree...
....with the other people who suggested you should start a animation series. Thanks to the people at Newgrounds for making this possible. I enjoy times like this. People helping each other to make life grand. Excuse me for getting sappy, but I'm just telling like it is! P.S. I underestimated my score for your version of the 'cat came back', I should have given it a score of 8.
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once again a weird peice of shit
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THAT WAS GREAT! I LOVE YOUR 50'S STYLE MUSIC AND ART DECO THEME, BUT THE CLOCK SKIPPED TIME CAUSE AT THE BEGINNING IT WAS ALMOST AREADY 10
cheshirepus responds:
I know, back when I submitted this, I was still (and still am) extremely new to Flash and was just happy to have completed my second movie. I guess out of all the excitement, I failed to go back over it and make sure the details like the clock hands were up to par.
Simply wonderful!
Ah! The joys that be made without voices! The emotion was displayed so clearly that I understood everything eazily. And the music, was delightful, and fitting! I also really like how you used game sprites for the fire breath and the exploding boss, it was done perfectly. I save my 10s for moments like this!