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Reviews for "midnight party"

I don't like this much, but that may just be genr

I can understand wanting to keep a consistent tempo and beat in a dance tune, but throughout the whole song, there were only 2 rhythms and you didn't change up very often.

The melody seemed a bit too predictable for my liking.

The pounding beats you had were cool and I liked how you changed them up a little. Maybe another instrument, or something would help?

The fade-outs sounded a bit bizarre to me - if you're trying to make a steady rhythm for folk to dance to, it seems odd to have a drop in tempo like that. It kinda sounds like a bad DJ.

I don't like this much, but that may just be genre preference.

- Review Request Club -

aldlv responds:

ok... was predictable... you may be right with that...
another instrument... yep... for the next time
the fade-outs bizarre?... well that's interesting... I'm going to think a lot about that
ok... thanx for your honesty
(and... I apologize for being close minded)

Hmmm...

First piece of advice: -Never- use preset samples with FL unless you're gonna layer them to make a different sound or modify then. We're all guilty of it indeed, but try getting rid of the habit. Eurogate is nice, but it's too cliche as well.

The melody doesn't really offer much and the drums are weak, to the point of being boring. I don't feel like you knew where the hell you wanted to go with the track, it seems very disorganized. You should try experimenting with melodies until you make something you feel is unique and catchy. It seems like you're new to the whole music-making hobby, so practice a lot and have fun.

-Review Request Club-

aldlv responds:

ohh... ok... i think you are right... never again work with the preset samples that way
yep.. I'm very new
I still trying to learn how to use the program... but... that's not an excuse... I should continue practicing (a lot)
DISORGANIZED is the right word...
i like your review a lot... you really pointed a lot of things, and thinking about it.. you are right on them
thanx a lot man

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lol again, where do you get off critiqeing my work and voting it down to a 3 when you dubmit shit like this.. hey buddy get original.. i can recognize all the shitty synths you used.. make your own you unoriginal bastard.

You leads are cheezy. no real melody, hard to comprehend wtf you where trying to acomplish.. and your beats are boring.. and fades outs are random, and its just to short.

aldlv responds:

Are you voting because of what you heard... or because of what i vote on your song? I'm not that good, i know, and i criticize your work hard, cool, i just didn't like THAT song, but voting 0 on mine, pathetic, you are just a crying baby...