Nice, but a little short.
A decent start to your Trance journey.
The beat is good and the addition of various counter-beats works quite well. I liked the fade out in the middle, as it brought everything back down to earth before starting with the second wave of sonic assault :P
It loops quite well, which does detract slightly from the fact that it is an overall quite short piece.
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a decent start..
sound good...
I think you are right
thanx
Alright
It seems to be very much the same sort of beat all the way through the song, or simler, not too much change though it does sound okay and does pretty much work in a way. Also this seems to loop very well, which is a plus, so good job on the looping part, it does also sound to end well, so that transition is good.
Though a lot more to this might have been good to hear, it wasn't too bad on a whole, so pretty good job on this one. But the looping is the best thing about it.
3/5
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nice review
I'm glad you like how it loop
Good
It was good, started off well, built up into a very nice song. I did feel it kinda stopped a bit shorted but other than that it wa a very nice song. For your first "Trance" song it wasd quite good
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thanx...
kinda stopped... ok... I have to work on that
I thought it was fitting.
Even though all you have to do is write two more audio reviews and pass me back up, I've decided to write this audio review, which will allow me to pass you in total audio reviews. Don't get me wrong. It's not bad, but what you need to understand is that I could go to the Trance section of newgrounds, close my eyes, and not be able to tell the difference between this song and most of the low scoring trance songs. It really lacks in originality and structure. It's just so simple and.. well just boring. I do see that it was your first trance song. I would have given this submission a 5/10, but since it was your first trance I will bump it up to a 7. Sorry I can't give you any technical tips on how to make your audio better because I don't really know anything about audio itself. I just know that this is pretty short, boring, unoriginal, etc.. Also, congrats on having it used in a submission. Now pass me pack. =P
one of my first tries on making a song, is not that good... but is not tha bad
Decent
So I thaught this was decent it has some decent build up and flows nicely throughout but was kind of short maybe adding some extra tid bits here and there would be cool I thaught some added instrament sounds would be cool too but could be longer also
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Some added instraments sounds would be cool
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