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I loved the calm pads in the beginning, you'll need to have more of it in parts like 0:21 and on etc. One thing that got me is how drums sound very weak for this kind of song. Sharpen up that kick and use a snare with a longer decay for awe. More distortion on bass would do good too.
Lovely little sine synth you got going, I'd boost its level and reverb it around if I were you. Now for the orchestrale... again I'd reverb the staccato strings for amplifying that highlands feeling you just gave it with them strings. Also some remarkable string chords and bass strings to back up the staccato would have been absolutely fantastic. Then how about adding brasses... nah, now I'm just daydreaming :o
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