Good for a first, but needs work.
That was pretty good for a first submission. The sound fitted really good! The only thing that really needed changing was the graphics and frame rate. Try setting it roughly to 30fps. And possibly stop using the brush tool as much for your drawings, i would recomend just make a line drawing and fill it with linear, radial effects etc. Overall, 7/10 - it was pretty good.
It was alright...
First of all, I'd like to say that I know how much work goes into these movies... and that you put a lot of effort in. However, you really need to improve on the graphics (especially the people)... just take more time while drawing them and they'll come out a lot better. And the animation needed a lot of work (like when the guy was turning the steering wheel) but you've probably gotten a lot better since then since this took a year to make. What really made up for that stuff was the music... it fit so well. What song was that?
great
Really good Music went well with it It was really good
thank you my child
that was ok
it was too short though....and i think it needs some voices. but other than that it was good.
the no voices was on purpose, it was meant to concentrate on the characters moods and just the pure visuals and you could almost pick up everything that needs to be said.
this a good flash
i can imagine what it is like to make a new flash, not understanding it all, nervous, and trying to make something everone will like. i can see what u might be going through. just make it a little better and have voices and this would be a great flash
thank you son, i am finally back and am working on some amazing projects that should be out soon.