I applaud...
You do very well with close up work. The music and animation sounds were done to precision (for Flash work) My only suggestion is to let someone else animate other things....like faces in profile.
You've got the knowledge of machinery, but not to draw human profile. Ye cain't draw peeps, yo
o well..its just a style i geuss...youll have to accpet it like stick figures i geuss!
not too bad
very nice drawings, but as you said the frame rates couls use some work as well as just the animation in general. cool story though. i was intrigued. ^^
Thanks a bunch..part two will have muh faster frame rate
great!!!
what an exellent flash
but it was a little slow with the movement. But thats my only negitive.
Otherwise it was spectacular and you set it well and i did not get confused
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good work
-king of the portal
Thanks! I will work on part two which will be even better.
decent
You had some cool moments in there, but all in all it was really boring. You had some cool effects, like the memento scene with the bullet re-entering the gun. Make it more excting, and I'm sure it'll be a hit.
Well, it cant be all action or it would sacrifice story line! but thanks for the insipration!
Straight 9
Beautiful, that's all I can say about it... Just like a movie, even has a great storyline. Good sound effects and music, now only the graphics... but that's up to part two.
Thanks man. its nice to know hard work is apprecitaed. But part two will be even better!