A flawed, but intresting film
Well, above the technical levels, this certaintly is a worthwhile piece of flash. While your attention to detail seems to be a bit lacking (Little things stand out, like the shell casing flying into the side of the gun, no animation on the steering wheel while the charcter is driving, the bullet wound simply folding upwards when in reverse, etc.) you still manage to create a compelling story, and intrest the viewer. Now, i don't expect this edition to get very high scores simply because you don't show an talent for animation, but that can improve in time (How did you animate it, anyway? It looks like you drew it frame by frame)
I would love to see you put some more work into this series, given improved animation, i could see a future version of this easily being a daily feature