um..
well, Its far from perfect..because there is no story plot...Graphics looked nice...character design was good lookin. Just main problem is that there is no story and its really short.
Reviews for "The Mourner"
((( VERY SLOW )))
~~REVIEW~~
This was kinda not that good, i man the "CHARACTERS" were great and lots of detail, but very little animation, it also looped which was not good, might want to work out the bugs on this one...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You could add a "STOP-ACTION-CODE" it will help for the looping that the flash does, it will make it so that the user presses play and at the end replay, you will also need the propper "PLAY" and "REPLAY" buttons aswell, feel free to stop by the "FLASH" Forums on the newground BBS as they will help you on how to add this script into your flash
~~OVERALL~~
Loops and was very slow needs some work...
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good
i think this was a good flash together with 2 and 3. i just want 2 know what musik it is in all of them... it serious and sad... it goes real well with the pics... the Mourner looks real sad in this one, not many people get their characters to look that sad... GOOD JOB!
Good short
I loved your short, it was serious, and good, just a really good short.
i like your style
the music seemed familier.... final fantasy right? maybye you should try doing a flash about final fantasy 7, a sad one about cloud and aeris, or touching one about cloud and tifa when they were kids.