Consider the....
Consider the time and date on when it was submitted,
Even if we compare this to todays' flash submission
It is still good and can keep up.
I like the story and the background music,...
your drawing as well,..
Even though it's short
We understand the story's message,.
Just like "The bard songs"
I like it so much
the same on how i loved your "" The Bard's Song""
wow animation was bad and not to mean
the drawing was to...im sure he has hands there so much more that can be done like tears rain arms in his lap and slowly comeing over his face ...or even clapseing andclutching the tomb stone in anguish.
ehh
no real animatin here, just three leaves moving and a fade in. I think that it is not really necessarily a bad flash, but it has no background nusic, sound effects voices, no real animation or movement of the character, and it makes it kind of hard to sitthrouhg, even for a flash so short.
what?
the artwork is decent at best and as for the story....well there really isnt one, a guys at a tombstone, says i miss you, spirit says i know, over that doesnt make a story, im not even sure what that makes the music is nice but the quality isnt the greatest, this just didnt make much sense to me and i didnt enjoy it at all
Sad yet beautiful
It's a very touching story about the death of a loved one. The music works for the just this purpose.
I've been reading your comic for years and I have to say it's the best I've ever read. Keep it up.