Mmm....
Not a fantastic bit of work.. .but not bad... it's a beautiful concept... truely... the main problem with this piece is the pacing... It's very slow... at the beggining. sure. long silent moment, as the leaves flutter down as we noteice the mourner... then the ghost.. no, ,spirit appears and the exchange... I miss you.. .I know.... then the ghost fades away and the leaves foosh upward again in a few momnts of time.. .rahter then giving us the impression of.. well.. I see two actors on a stage.. neither of thm are very good and both have to wait until the director hisses at them to get off stage and continue withthe play....
essentially, quicken the pace a bit.. it'll help. you've a good hand for art.. also.. whats the music playing?