oooooooooooook

listen, everybody knows what happens when you jump off a 10 story building.

That flash was a waste of my time and yours.

Make something more interesting next time.

In other words, that was gayyyyyyyeeeeee

Great style

Your style of animation was great. Like most said, a little sound would work well with this. And upping the frame rate....some scenes lagged.

Eh...

It COULD be real good.

Like everything is nice and interesting...but honestly...

You need some music...

It'd be much better with some sound...Not necessarily effects of the guy or anything...but some music would be rreeeally nice and highly improce this.

Promising stuff...

Your hand at drawing is great, on top of which your coloring also set the tone quite nicely. The drawings though not all detailed, conveyed your ideas correctly and effectively. The animations are slow but it all goes toward serving your more depressed sad mood.

The only problem I see, aside from it being quite short, is the lack of music. Music does contribute to about 60% or 70% of a persons emotions. Without it, it did indeed make your flash quite slow and monotonous. So with some music and sound effects your flash could be great. Hopefully even make it into the serious shorts collection someday.

emo

They say, someones creations reflect how they feel inside.

I did not like the movie dye to no sound and and it being emo... I wish emo people would dissapear... Wait no... I wish my grass was emo so it would cut itself.