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Reviews for "Don't Jump"

Good work. make it better

That was very good for a start. I kinda figured from the title, "Don't jump" and the very first shot of the top of the building, it was going to be a suicide movie.
But I liked where you were going with this....even tho it wasn't very good, I could tell what you were trying to mean. Ok well it was very slow, and I don't know if you were just making it really slow for the dramatic effect of the whole movie or if you were just being cautious about animating...but you need to up the frame rate, so it runs smoother. Next, i suggest you to add sound and maybe a music track. Music and sounds add soo much to the overall effectiveness of a movie. With music, you can convey the mood and tone of the movie that much easier....and add depth to the pictures. Next, the graphics were a bit dark....maybe too dark...and i had to squint at some parts.....maybe you could lighten it up a bit...umm...apart from that, that was quite good.
I liked how you showed us him inside his little "world/heaven" after he fell....and then the sudden cutback to his dead body laying on the ground. Very good.

It's a start...

now add some music and up the frame rate, it moved way to slow and with no sound was boring, but the art was decent and the animation wasn't too bad, fix the music and frame rate issues and you could have some great stuff. good luck with future animations.

...EMO!

it was ok, you really need to put some type of song. oh and did i mention that this screams emo!

kinda boring

needs music or something

Eerie... I like it...

Definatly liked the style of this animation, very nice work if you only took 8 hours man

Although I do agree with the last review, there should have been some sort of background music throughout it... maybe something mellow sounding or something....

With that and a couple more sound effects this would have been a great flash instead of just a good one