Eerie... I like it...
Definatly liked the style of this animation, very nice work if you only took 8 hours man
Although I do agree with the last review, there should have been some sort of background music throughout it... maybe something mellow sounding or something....
With that and a couple more sound effects this would have been a great flash instead of just a good one
Eh...
It COULD be real good.
Like everything is nice and interesting...but honestly...
You need some music...
It'd be much better with some sound...Not necessarily effects of the guy or anything...but some music would be rreeeally nice and highly improce this.
Great style
Your style of animation was great. Like most said, a little sound would work well with this. And upping the frame rate....some scenes lagged.
Good work. make it better
That was very good for a start. I kinda figured from the title, "Don't jump" and the very first shot of the top of the building, it was going to be a suicide movie.
But I liked where you were going with this....even tho it wasn't very good, I could tell what you were trying to mean. Ok well it was very slow, and I don't know if you were just making it really slow for the dramatic effect of the whole movie or if you were just being cautious about animating...but you need to up the frame rate, so it runs smoother. Next, i suggest you to add sound and maybe a music track. Music and sounds add soo much to the overall effectiveness of a movie. With music, you can convey the mood and tone of the movie that much easier....and add depth to the pictures. Next, the graphics were a bit dark....maybe too dark...and i had to squint at some parts.....maybe you could lighten it up a bit...umm...apart from that, that was quite good.
I liked how you showed us him inside his little "world/heaven" after he fell....and then the sudden cutback to his dead body laying on the ground. Very good.
Promising stuff...
Your hand at drawing is great, on top of which your coloring also set the tone quite nicely. The drawings though not all detailed, conveyed your ideas correctly and effectively. The animations are slow but it all goes toward serving your more depressed sad mood.
The only problem I see, aside from it being quite short, is the lack of music. Music does contribute to about 60% or 70% of a persons emotions. Without it, it did indeed make your flash quite slow and monotonous. So with some music and sound effects your flash could be great. Hopefully even make it into the serious shorts collection someday.