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A ninja is at a rambonctious state of mind. Re writen the script, its funier.
I have seen this before but do not remember where. Have you submitted it to other sites or something?
newgrounds isnt the only flash site.
animation was great
but there were some downfalls.
to make this better:
-make the backround lighter so you can see the people better
-add voice acting
-add more episodes, and do like JZ, where you explain it all at the end
-change the name to something more serious
then it would be awesome!
It was okay... I guess.
Such a crappy and overused plot, made no sense whatsoever. The grammar could have been better too. But DAMN IT if that wasn't some amazing animation, I give you props on that.
You totally jacked the Rurouni Kenshin OVAs, even have the same music from it.
Other than that it was alright I suppose.
Great Flash... plot?
Your style is alright, don't get me wrong, because my flash sucks.
However, although I'd love to give you something over a four... the plot has GOT to be the most cliche` thing I have ever heard.
-Killing lots of people sneakily
-Correction, no dialouge, wooden text
-Discussion of Gun v. Sword
-Ninja killing a bunch of people he used to work for
-Swearing he wont kill for money, because of... sudden fit of morality
-Looking for his... brother.
If you freshen up your plot ideas, your flashes could go places. This one is a great example of your understanding of movement, attacks, and flash... but is a glaring example of over-used plot threads run so rampant it kills the entire thing. I'm sorry.
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
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