c i gave u a 5 but 1 serious questain
is he gay because he wanted to become 1 soul with his brother?!?!?!?!?!?!
c i gave u a 5 but 1 serious questain
is he gay because he wanted to become 1 soul with his brother?!?!?!?!?!?!
Very Nice
A pretty decent flash with a few things that i would change. First off I would put voices into my flash.It adds to the setting. Second in the next one you should explain his past and why he is fighting. But I digress, very nice job!
wow this is great!
this is great but it could use actual voices and better graphics.also you should try putting blood on the sword when he kills someone
it wasn't bad
it was ok, i like how you added a clincher at the end, if there weren't as many typos it'd be better as well.
one thing that confused me was i wasn't sure who was saying what, if you could make it more clear which guy is saying what, people would understand your story better
good nonetheless
worst story ever
the flash was good the story was like some cheesy japanese ninja wannabe total crap