Wow I'm amazed who knew so many NG users had such talent. Anyway excellent story MM I look forward to seeing how others users are offed,
"The worst kind of coward is one that is only brave enough to show his face in the dark...."
At 10/23/05 04:33 AM, -Canas- wrote: Lovely story.
Thanks
I look foward to reading more and such.
I'll try to at least to 6 chapters a day, I'm aiming for this to be a long story. Only a few people have died, the game is just now getting into that concept of trust. Who can a person trust?
Still original, creative & innovative, most known unknown.
At 10/23/05 05:10 AM, RedCircle wrote: Just kidding.
Carry on.
You are quite the kidder, that's for sure.
i signed up in 2004 you preteen cunts, get off my lawn
At 10/23/05 05:10 AM, RedCircle wrote: Just kidding.
Carry on.
*strangles redcircle*
At 10/23/05 05:10 AM, RedCircle wrote: Just kidding.
Carry on.
Damn straight >:)
Strength: Stealthy, unnoticeable.
Weakness: sensitive nervous system, so pain cripples fast.
It's fairly obvious who's going to win the ten million.......
...Mast3rMind.
That's how it always seems to end up in threads like this.
Theres no chance of me actually getting to be in this story is there?
Just in case
Strength: Intellegence, complete and utter randomness
Weakness: Short attention span
Kuro - Puting the 'Kur' back in 'inkurable disease.'
Shaping up to be a superb story.
Wonder how i will come into it??
I just hope this dosn't end up like that old DontTouchMe comic.
God, those were horrible. How he kept trying to make himself look cool but only ended up looking like a complete and total total n00b.
Please don't suffer the same fate.
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Awsome, Mast3rMind, i didnt think you would get to chapter 3 tonight but its awsome as always, keep em coming....
~X~
Strength: Ice, and cutting things down
Weakness: Fire, and poor jokes
(i'm gonna kill the other noobs like Noob-antichrist and Noob-Christ)
At 10/23/05 05:55 AM, Noob-reaper wrote: Strength: Ice, and cutting things down
Weakness: Fire, and poor jokes
(i'm gonna kill the other noobs like Noob-antichrist and Noob-Christ)
Bring it on!
i could kick your ass anyday! >:)
Strength: Fire
Weakness: Milk cartons (Dan Abnormal)
I hardly ever come here anymore....
At 10/23/05 06:00 AM, BoBoTheHippo wrote: Alt account much?
Roffl...
I see now, the names were sorta ok but then the sigs gave it away haha....
~X~
At 10/23/05 05:36 AM, BoBoTheHippo wrote: It's fairly obvious who's going to win the ten million.......
...Mast3rMind.
That's how it always seems to end up in threads like this.
You know nothing, I have no plans on winning in my own story, it would be petty and pathetic, someone else besides me will win. Believe me on this, if I made myself the winner, it would take out the whole concept of "Anyone could win" Just because I'm making the story, doesn't mean that I have to win. Know that, and watch how I mold this this story more and more into something that isn't something to make myself look cool. This for the people in the story. For the people waiting to see who lives and dies next, this is what this is for. To keep everyone guessing. I cannot make myself the winner, end of statement.
Still original, creative & innovative, most known unknown.
BBS Battle Royale Chapter Four "Trust"
Who can a person trust when the very person that they think they know, is someone that you've never met? Could you trust this person with your life, can you even trust yourself with their life in your hands? Trust is a powerful thing, how a person uses it will make or break them. See how trust is used now as we continue the story.
SSG is walking by herself in what looks to an empty city. Holding tightly her Tech 9, ready for combat. Looking very closely though every alley, and through each car to make sure no one or nothing pops up from them with the intent to attack. You see a hard look on her face, but even so, the soul is still soft.
Sifft! Sifft!
SSG- Who's there?! I know someone's here! Come out damn it! I'm not here to play games!
A shadow emerges from the alley.
SSG- Walk slowly, I don't want to hurt you if I don't have to!
From the shadows is none other than DaSadGirl.
SSG- Hey, I thought I'd never see a person I didn't know from the forums!
DaSadGirl- Me neither! I'm so lucky to have found you!
Minutes later they go insde of an abandoned warehouse to chat.
SSG- When you originally signed up for this, did you expect this shit to happen?
DaSadGirl- To be honest, I don't think anyone did. It's sick that people should have kill each other just to survive.
SSG- Yeah, I already miss home. I want to go home so badly.
DaSadGirl- Yeah, for once, home is sounding really good right about now.
SSG- Tomorrow's another day, and it won't be a good one unless we stay up all night worrying ourselves to death.
DaSadGirl- You're right. I guess getting some rest would be a good thing. Good night.
SSG- Good night.
That very same night SSG had a conflicting dream. All she saw was red. She'd open and close her eyes and that's all she could see, she would rub them bare and still see red. This dream tormented her mind badly. Everytime she thought of her family, she saw them, but only a her funeral and she thought more and more about it, her vision, her premonition gave her a closer to her own body resting in the casket. She woke up from that dream, that nightmare, that vision, that premonition. Knowing that it was all too real.
SSG- I want to go home. DaSadGirl is my friend, but can I really trust her?!
SSG begins to rock back and forth biting the tip of her index finger.
SSG- My life or hers, my life or hers, my life or hers. What to do, what to do?
The dream had followed her into reality now to a point that whenever she closed her eyes she saw herself dead laying in a casket surrounded by her family.
SSG- It's not real! It's not real!
DaSadGirl wakes up
DaSadGirl- Is something wrong?
SSG- Leave! Now!
DaSadGirl- Why? What's wrong?
SSG- Please leave, I'm starting to break down. I have no idea what'll do to oyu, please run away now.
DaSadGirl picks up her Beretta and takes off running, while SSG has finally lost all her grip of sanity and has picked up her Tech 9 ready to hunt her friend. She gets DaSadGirl in her sights and begins firing. With all the equipment laying around it makes for somewhat good protection as DaSadGirl leaps over a machine, crouches behind it and starts shooting back.
DaSadGirl- Damn it! I know this isn't you SSG. Snap back to reality!
RATATATATATA! *The sound of bullets exiting the Tech 9*
SSG- Reality! You wanna talk about reality?! I'll talk about it nice and simple. Only one person survives, surely you remember what Wade said, right?
RATATATATA!
DaSadGirl- You know as well as I do that we have somewhat of a good chance to get through this together! Why do you wanna fuck that up?!
BANG BANG! *Returning fire from DaSadGirls Beretta"
SSG- The only way werre making out of this together is in death!
RATATATATA!
DaSadGirl- Fuck this!
DaSadGirl runs and makes a dash for the window.
SSG- Stupid idea!
RATATATATATA! One of the bullets hit DaSadGirl in the side, but still heading towards the window, jumping through it.
SSG- Seems simple enough, all I have to do is follow the blood trail. Easy as pie.
SSG leaves the warehouse to follow the trail of blood leading her to a shed. The blood trail seems to end inside of the shed.
SSG- Peekaboo!
She kicks in the door, and no one is there. Instead the DaSadGirl hangs from the shed and is now behind SSG.
DaSadGirl- Goodbye, friend.
BLAM! A shot to the back of the head as blood gets on the DaSadGirl mixing with the tears dripping from a face that contained sorrow and heavy grief. DaSadGirl takes all of SSG's belongings and buries SSG.
DaSadGirl- I'm going to get Wade for this! I swear on my word! I will have my vengeance. I will move heaven and hell to give what he deserves, so help me! I won't die until I know that I've had my vengeance! I swear it!
Meanwhile...
BareNakedMike- So...what do you have to eat.
Mast3rMind- Two cans of chili. How about you?
BareNakedMike- A box of fucking fruit roll ups, what the hell?!
Mast3rMind- I guess it makes sense, don't you think?
BareNakedMike- What?
Mast3rMind- He also made it so if we don't get kill, we don't eat. Like true predators.
BareNakedMike- I ain't damn animal, but yeah, I will kill someone for food.
Mast3rMind- I'll tade my two cans of chili for your fruit roll ups.
BareNakedMike- Why?
Mast3rMind- I hate chili with a passion.
BareNakedMike- Makes since. I've been meaning to ask, when do we out this "faith" to good use?
Mast3rMind- I honestly don't know. Let's go looking around for people.
BareNakedMike- Or better yet look for our deaths, remember, not everyone can be trusted.
Mast3rMind- I know, but remember what I said about faith man. It could be a rewarding thing.
BareNakedMike- Well, who are people who you think you can trust?
Mast3rMind- I'm thinking Zen_Gaijin, and TheBoneThug, everyone else I'm not quite sure of.
BareNakedMike- Well, I do have one person in mind.
Mast3rMind- Who'd that be?
BareNakedMike- SSG, she is someone we can definetly trust. I've never seen her crack under pressure with anything. She'd take good care of us.
Mast3rMind- I bet she would, but remember though, this is real life, net personalities don't apply all that well. For all we know, SSG could've snapped and hurt someone by now.
BareNakedMike- It doesn't seem like she could, but you are right, this is real life. Anyone could crack.
End of Chapter Four
Still original, creative & innovative, most known unknown.
Heh i cant keep up with as fast as you put them out, very good indeed, DSG will enjoy this Chapter me thinks hehe...
~X~
47 More to go right?
Make this long don't get tired of it and it will be great :D
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At 10/23/05 07:10 AM, FatBoyBillyBob wrote: 47 More to go right?
Make this long don't get tired of it and it will be great :D
If he doesnt burn himself out im sure he will be ok, oh and real life roffl, but so-far its looking great the best of any stories we had....
~X~
Great story so far. Too bad I didn't get on it.
Seeing that the island has mostly guys, only few girls, and everyone has nothing to lose -> attempted rape somewhere on the way.
Aw mayun, dead already?
At least I got killed by someone cool. 8-)
At 10/22/05 05:59 PM, Re-Spawn wrote: Do ichi the killer i mean come on write about rape, violence, torture, its better than br :)
lol i watched BR the first time after i had seen ichi the killer, 2 bloody movies in 1 day xD
At 10/23/05 01:44 AM, Chumbawamba wrote: Excellent. :)
RIP SiCcMaDe ;(
The bastard deserved it for sleeping while Wade was lecturing, though...
So Sarai is going to be the Souma of Newgrounds, eh? Ha ha ha!
LOL I DIED FIRST WHAHAHAHA xD
Amazing story. Out through it, I couldn't help but smile at how cleverly written it was. I am also happy I atchally said something. OH YEAH. Blue Flame Skulls, at least I got the weakness right. I would also like to say that I will be copying and saving this great story because it's so damm great.
This too will pass.
Memento mori
wanna bet that if i didnt die first the story would be greater? :P
YA RLY!
