At 2/24/13 10:45 PM, Kinsei01 wrote:
just finished reading through the submission thread. nice job guys
Posted with a couple of seconds to spare!!!
If case you all wanted to read the amazing job gmanthesandwich did, here's the whole script he wrote for me. I could only do the first part for the challenge but I feel the story ran smoothly and we killed the "stolen" theme with that first part but anyways without further ado, read on :)
A dystopic cityscape is seen in the middle of the night.
Neon signs shine brightly against the dark buildings.
Caption: New Muerta, this shit hole never sleeps.
A man is seen holding a beat up briefcase with wires hanging out of it.
Caption: My name is Ferdinand, I'm an entrepreneur of sorts. I take what this city doesn't want and turns it to what they need.
A drug dealer walks up to Ferdinand.
Hey man, you lookin' for somethin'? Cause I got everything from zyphenol to unbitterol.
do you have tryxoxin?
Hell yeah man, I got it all.
Hmm. Well then I think you and I can do business, just not out here. Let's go over that way.
Ferdinand and the drug dealer walk over to an abandoned part of the alley way.
The drug dealer pulls out a pill bottle and sets it on top of a dumpster.
This lowlife has no idea what is in store for him.
There it is, 50 a pill.
sounds good enough.
Ferdinand swings his briefcase onto the top of the dumpster and opens it revealing a computer inside.
Take a look at this real quick.
Ferdinand hands the drug dealer a metal cylinder connected to a wire to the drug dealer.
The fuck is this?!
you'll see, just hold it tight.
The drug dealer holds the metal cylynder tight and ferdinand starts to typer on his briefcase computer.
Hey man, the fuck are you doing?
The metal cylynder ejects spikes that stab through the drug dealer's hand.
AHHHHHHH! What the fuck is this thing?
(This page will be just one large panel, like a piece of art.)
The drug dealer has light bursting out of his eyes and mouth and green smoke is circling his body.
A small vial connected to the computer fills up with bright light.
The drug dealer's corpse is laying on the ground; the body has no color left inside of it.
Caption: All in a day's work.
Here is the rest. Remember, everything that has the word caption in front of it means text box. Knock yourself out, it's been fun writing this.
A night club named "Dekadence" is seen in the panel. Ferdinand walks inside.
Ferdinand walks past all of the people dancing in the club.
Caption: I can't stand these places.
Ferdinand walks into a door and finds himself in a long hallway.
Ferdinand walks down the hallway. He then opens one of the doors.
Inside is an office with a man sitting behind a desk. Next to the desk is an armed guard.
The man speaks to Ferdinand.
You got the shit?
Only if you got the shit to get the shit.
The man throws three stacks of money onto the top of the desk.
Caption: I love this job.
That should suffice.
Ferdinand swings his briefcase onto the top of the desk and opens it.
Ferdinand pulls a small vial filled with light out of his briefcase.
Here it is.
Ferdinand hands the man the vial.
The man takes the vial and puts a small needle into it.
The man injects it into his skin.
There is a bright light.
When the light clears the man appears to be significantly younger.
Thanks. Now fuck off.
Ferdinand is seen walking down a sidewalk.
Caption: Some call me evil because I steal the souls of lowlifes. Some call me evil because I give bad people longer to live. But in the end; I don't care what people think.
If I have had more time I woulda been able to make some amazing panels but it was still pretty fun to do it all in two days.