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ninjarifle's art tread Jan. 10th, 2010 @ 04:12 PM Reply

This is my Offical art tread, I hope you guys will comment and give me some tips^^

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Response to ninjarifle's art tread Jan. 10th, 2010 @ 04:15 PM Reply

That's some nice shading you've got there!
You should probably focus on anotomy studies. Anotomy, and proportions, as the hips are a bit too small

Anyways, great job! Congrats on WACOM get!


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Response to ninjarifle's art tread Jan. 10th, 2010 @ 04:19 PM Reply

At 1/10/10 04:15 PM, havegum wrote: That's some nice shading you've got there!
You should probably focus on anotomy studies. Anotomy, and proportions, as the hips are a bit too small

Anyways, great job! Congrats on WACOM get!

thx man! yeah, the hips are to small...


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Response to ninjarifle's art tread Jan. 10th, 2010 @ 08:58 PM Reply

At 1/10/10 04:12 PM, ninjarifle wrote: This is my Offical art tread, I hope you guys will comment and give me some tips^^

Well... Lets see...
The head is quite wide, and one eye is wider than the other. The head should be a bit more rounded than it is now.
The hands (especially his right one) are quite funky. It has some really wierd curves in it.
Thats alot of oddly placed creases in his pants, even though his legs arent bent.
Guns arent that small, or normally, that white...
I think the anatomy is off, and yes, the hips are way too small for the size of his shoulders...
@ havegum too, I see some shading, on the face and the jacket and shirt, but i see almost no shading on the pants and the hair.
I really dont want to ask, but, are you using a line tool to do this, because it appears that way? Why not free hand it if you have a tablet?


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Response to ninjarifle's art tread Jan. 11th, 2010 @ 05:53 AM Reply

The character's left leg looks broken D:

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Response to ninjarifle's art tread Jan. 11th, 2010 @ 12:06 PM Reply

At 1/10/10 08:58 PM, Snowman wrote:
At 1/10/10 04:12 PM, ninjarifle wrote: This is my Offical art tread, I hope you guys will comment and give me some tips^^
Well... Lets see...
The head is quite wide, and one eye is wider than the other. The head should be a bit more rounded than it is now.
The hands (especially his right one) are quite funky. It has some really wierd curves in it.
Thats alot of oddly placed creases in his pants, even though his legs arent bent.
Guns arent that small, or normally, that white...
I think the anatomy is off, and yes, the hips are way too small for the size of his shoulders...
@ havegum too, I see some shading, on the face and the jacket and shirt, but i see almost no shading on the pants and the hair.
I really dont want to ask, but, are you using a line tool to do this, because it appears that way? Why not free hand it if you have a tablet?

wow that's a long reply, can agree on what you saying, but the gun's very small, but i tried to make it a little like a dessert eagle and it's silver, right? and i din't use line tool, i actually used free hand, everything on the picture is free hand.


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Response to ninjarifle's art tread Jan. 11th, 2010 @ 12:07 PM Reply

one more thing.... i don't know have to use line tool on photoshop:P


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Response to ninjarifle's art tread Jan. 11th, 2010 @ 12:08 PM Reply

At 1/11/10 05:53 AM, barrywu998 wrote: The character's left leg looks broken D:

that's to bad:( i will try not to draw broken legs in my drawings.


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Response to ninjarifle's art tread Jan. 11th, 2010 @ 12:23 PM Reply

If everything is freehand, then why are the lines rigid and jagged, as opposed to curved and smooth?

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Response to ninjarifle's art tread Jan. 11th, 2010 @ 12:33 PM Reply

At 1/11/10 12:23 PM, big-jonny-13 wrote: If everything is freehand, then why are the lines rigid and jagged, as opposed to curved and smooth?

drawn freehand or drawn in freehand, the art program thats what it looks more like, or flash with auto smoothing

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Response to ninjarifle's art tread Jan. 11th, 2010 @ 03:01 PM Reply

At 1/11/10 12:06 PM, ninjarifle wrote:
but i tried to make it a little like a dessert eagle and it's silver, right?

Your far, far off from a desert eagle my friend...

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Response to ninjarifle's art tread Jan. 12th, 2010 @ 03:56 PM Reply

At 1/11/10 12:23 PM, big-jonny-13 wrote: If everything is freehand, then why are the lines rigid and jagged, as opposed to curved and smooth?

I was very careful when i drawed, so that the lines would be smooth


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Response to ninjarifle's art tread Jan. 12th, 2010 @ 03:59 PM Reply

At 1/11/10 03:01 PM, Snowman wrote:
At 1/11/10 12:06 PM, ninjarifle wrote:
but i tried to make it a little like a dessert eagle and it's silver, right?
Your far, far off from a desert eagle my friend...

I kinda knew^^ I was just making a pistol so I thought of desert eagle and took the colour of the gun.


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Response to ninjarifle's art tread Jan. 12th, 2010 @ 04:30 PM Reply

At 1/12/10 03:56 PM, ninjarifle wrote:
At 1/11/10 12:23 PM, big-jonny-13 wrote: If everything is freehand, then why are the lines rigid and jagged, as opposed to curved and smooth?
I was very careful when i drawed, so that the lines would be smooth

What he means is that there aren't many curves in what you drew, like at the shoulders, hands, and chin.
It's all very angular, when the body doesn't have much in the way of straight lines and pointed edges.

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Response to ninjarifle's art tread Jan. 12th, 2010 @ 04:45 PM Reply

What he means is that there aren't many curves in what you drew, like at the shoulders, hands, and chin.
It's all very angular, when the body doesn't have much in the way of straight lines and pointed edges.

that makes sense:P didn't quite understand what he said.


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Response to ninjarifle's art tread Jan. 12th, 2010 @ 04:49 PM Reply

how do you guys like this sketch? practised on the top torso. kinda easy when i see how it's supposed to be

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Response to ninjarifle's art tread Jan. 12th, 2010 @ 04:53 PM Reply

did you use reference?


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Response to ninjarifle's art tread Jan. 12th, 2010 @ 04:53 PM Reply

At 1/12/10 04:49 PM, ninjarifle wrote: how do you guys like this sketch? practised on the top torso. kinda easy when i see how it's supposed to be

anatomy looks good and to tell the truth that has actually helped me a bit good work

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Response to ninjarifle's art tread Jan. 12th, 2010 @ 04:57 PM Reply

At 1/12/10 04:53 PM, havegum wrote: did you use reference?

yes, I did. found a little tutorial on it.


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Response to ninjarifle's art tread Jan. 12th, 2010 @ 04:58 PM Reply

anatomy looks good and to tell the truth that has actually helped me a bit good work

hurray! first person I helped^^


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Response to ninjarifle's art tread Jan. 12th, 2010 @ 06:05 PM Reply

At 1/11/10 03:01 PM, Snowman wrote:
At 1/11/10 12:06 PM, ninjarifle wrote:
but i tried to make it a little like a dessert eagle and it's silver, right?
Your far, far off from a desert eagle my friend...

It kind of looked like it but I guess it looked like he was holding a video game case


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Response to ninjarifle's art tread Jan. 12th, 2010 @ 06:36 PM Reply

Your far, far off from a desert eagle my friend...
It kind of looked like it but I guess it looked like he was holding a video game case

heh, when you sad that it kinda felt like it:P


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Response to ninjarifle's art tread Jan. 12th, 2010 @ 06:53 PM Reply

At 1/12/10 04:58 PM, ninjarifle wrote:
anatomy looks good and to tell the truth that has actually helped me a bit good work
hurray! first person I helped^^

eermm your welcome, where was that tutorial by the way, and was there more than just that one

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Response to ninjarifle's art tread Jan. 12th, 2010 @ 06:56 PM Reply

At 1/12/10 06:53 PM, ashman112 wrote:
At 1/12/10 04:58 PM, ninjarifle wrote:
anatomy looks good and to tell the truth that has actually helped me a bit good work
hurray! first person I helped^^
eermm your welcome, where was that tutorial by the way, and was there more than just that one

sorry, I don't remember where the tutorial where. Just go to google and search anatomy tutorial


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Response to ninjarifle's art tread Jan. 12th, 2010 @ 07:12 PM Reply

At 1/12/10 06:56 PM, ninjarifle wrote:
At 1/12/10 06:53 PM, ashman112 wrote:
At 1/12/10 04:58 PM, ninjarifle wrote:
anatomy looks good and to tell the truth that has actually helped me a bit good work
hurray! first person I helped^^
eermm your welcome, where was that tutorial by the way, and was there more than just that one
sorry, I don't remember where the tutorial where. Just go to google and search anatomy tutorial

well that was obvious, but i wanted to know that specific one haha, oh well guess it cant be helped i got enough tutorials in my favourites as it is
thanks

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Response to ninjarifle's art tread Jan. 12th, 2010 @ 07:31 PM Reply

well that was obvious, but i wanted to know that specific one haha, oh well guess it cant be helped i got enough tutorials in my favourites as it is
thanks

i can look for it, but I don't really feel like doing it now. maybe tomorrow


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Response to ninjarifle's art tread Jan. 12th, 2010 @ 07:36 PM Reply

At 1/12/10 07:31 PM, ninjarifle wrote:
well that was obvious, but i wanted to know that specific one haha, oh well guess it cant be helped i got enough tutorials in my favourites as it is
thanks
i can look for it, but I don't really feel like doing it now. maybe tomorrow

nah dont bother, i only wanted it at the time out of interest, i wasnt really desperate haha, looking forward to your next piece

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Response to ninjarifle's art tread Jan. 14th, 2010 @ 01:25 PM Reply

today's drawing is drawn in another style. just wanted to make it easy. you like?

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Response to ninjarifle's art tread Jan. 14th, 2010 @ 02:56 PM Reply

At 1/14/10 01:25 PM, ninjarifle wrote: today's drawing is drawn in another style. just wanted to make it easy. you like?

i lkie the new drawing, i suppos you did in purpose that the head would be bigger then the body. You must work with you anatomy. anyways, good work:D

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Response to ninjarifle's art tread Jan. 29th, 2010 @ 06:03 PM Reply

sketching nature

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