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Response to ninjarifle's art tread 2010-02-09 19:30:41 Reply

trying to draw a guy with armor the first time, so here's he progress of it.

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Response to ninjarifle's art tread 2010-02-09 19:34:51 Reply

At 2/9/10 07:30 PM, ninjarifle wrote: trying to draw a guy with armor the first time, so here's he progress of it.

wow that is a lot of lines, and a lot of colours, its kinda trippy

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Response to ninjarifle's art tread 2010-02-09 19:40:59 Reply

At 2/9/10 07:30 PM, ninjarifle wrote: trying to draw a guy with armor the first time, so here's he progress of it.

I see what you are trying to do here, but I think you have way too much going on and you'll get lost.
You need to simplify your sketching, it'll make it easier when you go to lay in detail.


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Response to ninjarifle's art tread 2010-02-10 17:35:01 Reply

I see what you are trying to do here, but I think you have way too much going on and you'll get lost.
You need to simplify your sketching, it'll make it easier when you go to lay in detail.

well the drawing is in several layers so I think it is going to be okey.


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Response to ninjarifle's art tread 2010-02-15 17:33:19 Reply

well, I haven't drawn soo much lately, but here's the progress

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Response to ninjarifle's art tread 2010-02-15 17:36:00 Reply

At 2/15/10 05:33 PM, ninjarifle wrote: well, I haven't drawn soo much lately, but here's the progress

Both parts of the right arm need to be a little longer, and the left thigh needs to be slightly longer.

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Response to ninjarifle's art tread 2010-02-15 17:38:12 Reply

At 2/15/10 05:36 PM, big-jonny-13 wrote:
At 2/15/10 05:33 PM, ninjarifle wrote: well, I haven't drawn soo much lately, but here's the progress
Both parts of the right arm need to be a little longer, and the left thigh needs to be slightly longer.

hm... well, yeah the right arm look kinda short and the thight i hoped nobody would see:P I shal try to fix that


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Response to ninjarifle's art tread 2010-03-03 16:57:35 Reply

I drew Timmy in heromode from fairies odd parents^^, I saw it on a episode and wanted to draw him.

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Response to ninjarifle's art tread 2010-03-03 17:34:54 Reply

At 3/3/10 05:00 PM, PrinceFlea wrote:
At 3/3/10 04:57 PM, ninjarifle wrote: I drew Timmy in heromode from fairies odd parents^^, I saw it on a episode and wanted to draw him.
Was this a new episode by any chance? I have not watched that cartoon after 2006.

I dont really know, I think it is.

but I did a improvment, beacuse Havgum ment it should be better^^ it's not super great, but it's better

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Response to ninjarifle's art tread 2010-03-03 17:52:57 Reply

is that a gradient background, because its too bright if its supposed to be night

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Response to ninjarifle's art tread 2010-03-03 18:00:30 Reply

At 3/3/10 05:52 PM, ashman112 wrote: is that a gradient background, because its too bright if its supposed to be night

yes it is gradient. the bright light is supposed to be a lighting light or something... i don't know, just wanted it there. is this better?

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Response to ninjarifle's art tread 2010-03-06 16:07:42 Reply

This is a fast sketch I don't think i'm going to continue on this, but it would be nice with some commments on anything wrong.

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Response to ninjarifle's art tread 2010-03-06 16:19:46 Reply

At 3/6/10 04:07 PM, ninjarifle wrote: This is a fast sketch I don't think i'm going to continue on this, but it would be nice with some commments on anything wrong.

it looks like a little kids head on a roidmonkeys body, plus tone down the line thickness, you want thinner outlines

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Response to ninjarifle's art tread 2010-03-10 14:05:33 Reply

here's my super hero! I call him ''The Blue Mantis!''. obviously i'm not done drwaing him.

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Response to ninjarifle's art tread 2010-03-10 14:08:20 Reply

At 3/10/10 02:05 PM, ninjarifle wrote: here's my super hero! I call him ''The Blue Mantis!''. obviously i'm not done drwaing him.

really long stomach and torso, thats all i can say, also, way to avoi drawing feet lol

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Response to ninjarifle's art tread 2010-03-10 14:11:02 Reply

At 3/10/10 02:08 PM, ashman112 wrote:
At 3/10/10 02:05 PM, ninjarifle wrote: here's my super hero! I call him ''The Blue Mantis!''. obviously i'm not done drwaing him.
really long stomach and torso, thats all i can say, also, way to avoi drawing feet lol

yeah maybe I will fix his stomach JUST maybe, and i suck at drawing feet so I wanted to avoid drawing them^^


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Response to ninjarifle's art tread 2010-03-10 14:16:27 Reply

although it's an unfinished piece, I would say getting the basic colors are important.
The blue color is too saturated in my opinion.
decrease the saturation, and it'll look much better!

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Response to ninjarifle's art tread 2010-03-10 14:19:19 Reply

At 3/10/10 02:16 PM, Havegum wrote: although it's an unfinished piece, I would say getting the basic colors are important.
The blue color is too saturated in my opinion.
decrease the saturation, and it'll look much better!

wow thx! I will keep that in mind!


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Response to ninjarifle's art tread 2010-03-19 19:15:51 Reply

oh yeah. finally done with my drawing. I haven't drawn much this day's, so I forced myself to color it done^^ keep coming with comments as always!

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Response to ninjarifle's art tread 2010-03-19 19:49:03 Reply

really good, you improved a lot from the first post GOOD JOB :D


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Response to ninjarifle's art tread 2010-03-20 13:33:26 Reply

At 3/19/10 07:49 PM, TheRelentlessWalrus wrote: really good, you improved a lot from the first post GOOD JOB :D

wow thx^^ makes my confidence bigger:P


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Response to ninjarifle's art tread 2010-04-02 11:46:35 Reply

a quick drawing, maybe I'll color it. I dunno... and I know I suck at drawing hands

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Response to ninjarifle's art tread 2010-04-02 16:07:33 Reply

All i can say is PRACTICE ANATOMY!


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Response to ninjarifle's art tread 2010-04-02 16:41:47 Reply

At 2/15/10 05:33 PM, ninjarifle wrote: well, I haven't drawn soo much lately, but here's the progress

I honestly liked the sketched, well proportioned, atractive looking one better :P


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Response to ninjarifle's art tread 2010-05-01 07:53:50 Reply

hey guys. it's been a long time seen i've drawn so here's a drawing I have been working on. i'm still not done with the drawing yet, and as usual just comment what ever you feel

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Response to ninjarifle's art tread 2010-05-01 10:54:32 Reply

At 5/1/10 07:53 AM, ninjarifle wrote: hey guys. it's been a long time seen i've drawn so here's a drawing I have been working on. i'm still not done with the drawing yet, and as usual just comment what ever you feel

Pretty simple. Add some shading.

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Response to ninjarifle's art tread 2010-05-01 11:05:03 Reply

that head is a bit squashed like its been flattened a bit, plus needs some shading

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Response to ninjarifle's art tread 2010-05-06 12:37:27 Reply

some update on the drawing. I have drawn some shading on the face and made the background, but I am still not done.

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Response to ninjarifle's art tread 2010-05-14 17:59:09 Reply

done drawing the smiling guy, comment!

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Response to ninjarifle's art tread 2010-05-14 18:30:21 Reply

At 5/14/10 05:59 PM, ninjarifle wrote: done drawing the smiling guy, comment!

i had to compare to see what you had added, shading on the hair, to be honest theres nothing i can say that hasnt been said, the head is too squashed as in its not tall enough, so focus on that next time, and work on improving your colouring/shading