My masterpiece!!!
tell me what you think...
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-first post on NG forum!!-
heres mine-
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i really don't have much musical exprience but i'm very intrested an learning and have been playing around with programs/insturments such as this one :D
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heres my third one.....i think it's almost as good as my first although at points i think it may be a tad reptative
At 1/31/04 07:25 PM, psychokitsune wrote: -first post on NG forum!!-
heres mine-
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i really don't have much musical exprience but i'm very intrested an learning and have been playing around with programs/insturments such as this one :D
sry for making a semi-usless post here(due to ngs lack of an edit button X_X ) could people tell me what they think if you could take the time to liston to the stuff i have and respond i would really appreciate that! thanks :)
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my fourth song, "why bother?"
I think this is good, you be the judge.
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I wish the things could be longer, I want to make a longer song :/
another of my older sisters creations....i like this better than the first....
apparently it's her turn to type to all of you....scary
78's sister: i did not create the dead kennedys.nor did i sleep with them.THere are no eskimos in this song but if i had the time and brain cells i would write a song about eskimos and their igloos what with tha jello puddin and tha blah blah blah I'm done ya fuckin crackfiends from outer space.
i be done
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COOLEST SONG EVER IT ROXXORS ALL OVER THE PLACE AND WILL HE_MAN_BITCH SLAP YOU ALL AT THE SAME TIME, OH SHIT MY ROOMMATES COMING IN THE ROOM, OH THATS GROSS HE GOT IT ALL OVER THE DOOR, FRIGGIN IDIOT. oH lORD JESUS WHO art IN HEAVENSAVEUSINYOURDIVINELIGHTTAKEMEWAYMYSELFRIGHTIOUSSUICIDEOHNOMYBLADDERBU
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"Field of Pain"
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Feedback on mine and I'll feed back on yours
Eww..I'm double posting...
Sorry the one above's messed up...
Here's and easier copy paste version...
Same title.."Field of Pain"
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At 1/31/04 11:21 PM, LlamaoDoom666 wrote: "Field of Pain"
Feedback on mine and I'll feed back on yours
hmm......some parts of it seem like a random button, but with parts edited :P....it was ok though
here is mine, titled 'killing off 6 mins'
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Here is my real song that I had to redo call "Wasnt Really Lost''
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At 1/31/04 10:54 PM, B00tleg wrote:
COOLEST SONG EVER IT ROXXORS ALL OVER THE PLACE AND WILL HE_MAN_BITCH SLAP YOU ALL AT THE SAME TIME,
bigest piece of shit...ever. -10/10
At 1/26/04 04:29 AM, Enoll wrote: I hope they make a heavy metal one...
that would kick some arse!
yes yes it would...
here's my song. Dig the crazy, long assed guitar solo!!
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theres the last one i made it's my overall favorite can someone give me some feedback on the last three i posted in here?
Song 1
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Song 2
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Song 3
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At 2/2/04 05:35 PM, -78- wrote: 999---2-------2---2---1---2-----6---------2---3--77776-88-1---9---9---3----
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It's very jumpy, some parts were good and other parts were not good, like in the begining.
Hmm...Is this good cause if it is plz tell me in next post or if it's not tell me it sux...lol
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a----------------------------- Kinda short
At 2/2/04 09:25 PM, Yoshister wrote:
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a----------------------------- Kinda short
You could really tweak on some parts of the song, most of it doesn't go well together.
It's very jumpy, some parts were good and other parts were not good, like in the begining.
so u mean the begining was good or bad?
I got 4 songs, and I figure one of em might be good, so here:
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Tell me what you think, and don't forget to tell me which song it is (1-4)
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I win
what are the buttons t copy and paste or whatever? How the hell do you do it!
here are 2 songs.. i like to focus on bass.
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I like the 2nd one better....
check this 1:
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tell me ur opinion
too many punk o matic threads lets try to put it under this one
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My first song. The bridge comes a second too premature, but aside from that THIS SONG ROCKS. Since it was my first song, I didn't fiddle around too much with the drums. If you guys like it, I'll re-do it better with the longer pause before the bridge and more varied drums. Whatcha think? Critique mine and I'll critique yours.
ur song sounds kinda like u clicked the random button and changed some stuff here and there, its kinda simple and well random- listen to mine 0---0-233---5-9---2---6--------------5-6----------1---0---335-6--11111---77
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