give me some feedback about mine...

0---80--0---889-----5-5555--0--880--1---3---56-81---1---3---885------------
--------------2---2---0---2---3-4--b--5-5-7-7-0---1---2---7-7-4---3-3-6----
----------------------------4-4-9-3-3-1---5-7-8-50---0---1---2-2-5-4-1--5-6
-3-7-6-a----------------------

At 1/30/04 05:06 PM, kryptik1 wrote: Huh. Surprising. I thought my first one would have gotten at least a 7. :P What part in the beginning threw it off?

Well it was as in most songs the leaf guitar. Some of the rifts clashed. like 5 and 6 clashed a bit. The combination of the bass with that was what made it sound weird. Dont get me wrong it was a great song

Man i liked that one but theres a part where the drums and the first guitarr stops i think that sounded bad and later i think you did all wrong the beat times of the drums but thatsmy opinion...

This is my best song so far i think

555668-5799975768757575756-6--757575756-6-6-888-757575757575757-6-6-6-888--
----------6-66-4-4-4-48-0--2---2---4-4--2---2---4-4-4-224-4---4---4---4---4
-4-4-224---b--------767674---678-67--666-666-3-3--777-777-44444-444-666-777
-678-678-44444-444-8----------

whato do you guys think if anyone sees a mistake in the song or think ot could be better tell me so i can arrenge it plz...

shuji: Blending wasnt bad but as in ALL songs there were clashes. Good Job overall. 6/10
*Fixed Version*: A lot better. some clashes were still there but almost all were fixed. 9/10

Faradin42: Liked the intro solo a lot. Didnt like that transaction into your solos. 5/10

LittleLordFauntLeRoy: (Ups and Downs) You like the bass huh? Loved the blend in most parts. But you clashed the lead guitar rifts a lot. The bass and Lead were in different beats. 7/10

Sathorael: Didnt go together very well at the begining or end. but it did turn out nice. 6/10

Crissan: Looked like you hit random. Sorry. 3/10

That's all the time I have at the moment more to come. I hope no one holds grudges for me scoring people lower than they wanted. But please be honest when rating mine. No one has yet and i wish some people would I want to hear opinions

9-6-0-6-9-6-2--06--9-0---06--6--6--2---0---2---0---17-----6--6-12---2--2-1-
----6-69--c0--0---c0--1----5---5--3----------1---1---1---1---1--3-5-29-9--1
---1--1-------5--c--a---0---a---3-0-0--0---324--430--893---3---3---3----3--
---------3---3--3--0---0-89a--

When I try to paste line by line and i delete all the spaces, I still get Data No Good.

i fixed song a little bit. sounds real good i think, some friends of mine thought so. now i want to no what you guys think. basically i fixed ending and some parts in middle that isnt noticeable.

4-2-98761---0---0--73---3---9-6-2---2---2---0-752---2---48657657--1---54879
--------------2---1---0---0---2---2---c---9---9---9---2---2---2---1---2----
-a---a---b----------2-4-1---0---3736762-1---1---a-------a-9-7-674-6-1---1--
-3736763-6-0---484------------

and RobG, leave your oh so cunning reviews, i wanna no if i pass or fail.

--------0---3---3---0---0---1---1-------5-8888----6-6----------0---3----4-1
-6-6--9-99----0---0---2---2---0---1---2---2-------1-8-----6-3-3-----0---0--
-2---3-1---4----c-ba0---0---0---1---1---0---2---3---3---4-4---8-8-6-6---6-6
-3-0---0---1---3-2--2-2-2-a-aa

heres my first one....could someone tell me what they think?

any kind of adwise and opinions are welcome

song 1:

----1---0---13---3---3---1---1-----61--51--51---6-883---3---3---95-----6---
----------3-3-4-040-4--a---a---7-7-0-4--0-4---2---2---2---3-3-5-5-5-5-5-5--
--c-----------------a----------------3-2-1------------------------------7-7
-8-8-787-787a-----------------

song 2:

5686-3---3---9-9-9-681---1---1--61--61---0---0---0---6-6-5----899----------
-----------------------c---c---3-3-2---4---4---4---4---4---1---3-3---3-3-bb
-------------------------1---1---6-6-8-8-----------------1---6-6-8---6-6---
--a---------------------------

song 3:

5556-881-21---823---99-9-9-3---3-----3---5-6-9-----------------------------
----------1---7-74---4---c---0---0---3-3-3-4---4---4---c-------------------
-----------------------------------0---4-4-4-4-4-4-4-----6---6-6-a---------
------------------------------

song 4:

568555-5-5-3---3---3--569999--1---1---1---2--------------------------------
----------------5-5-3-4---4---4---3-3-3-555-5-2---2---3-3-3-b--------------
--------------------------------------------8-8-8-a---a---8-8-2-2-6--------
------------------------------

9/10 eh? nice, could u plz tell me which bits dont quite sound rite so i can fix it again? if u missed it heres the song.

2---1---6-3-----2---0-----2---6-5-5-6-680--88----4-73---3--6-8870---1-57-2-
--2---2-9----60---1---1---2---4---5-7-7-7-0---1---a---4---5-6-0---a----c-60
---8--6-5-5-5-5-5-c-0---1---2-2-3---0---4-4-6-5-7-8-------------6-8-7---2--
------a--0-7-874---a88675076a-

Look no further because the best Punk-O-Matic song is right here! !

------0-0-0---6-6-6-6-6-6---9---6-6-6-9-9-9-0-0-0---6-6-6-6-6-6---9--------
6-6-6-9-----------------7-7-7-8-8-8---b-5-5-5-5-a---a---a---a-5-7-7-b-b-b--
-b--------7-7-7---b-4-4-4-4-4-4-4-6-6-6-6-6-1-0-a---------------4-4-4-4-6-6
-6-6-6-1-0-a--6-6-6-6-6-6-a---

This is my 1st creation on that sic punk music generating flash.

Enjoy!

At 1/30/04 10:03 PM, Hadji_San wrote:

::

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--------------2---1---0---0---2---2---c---9---9---9---2---2---2---1---2----
-a---a---b----------2-4-1---0---3736762-1---1---a-------a-9-7-674-6-1---1--
-3736763-6-0---484------------

I really liked that one.

here's my new one, me likes ta call it "all or nothing....more or less..."

----0--0--0---------80--1---1--9-9-9--81---1-1---1----------9--------------
----------0---0---1---1--------2---4---5-c-c-c---1-----1---2---0------b----
--------------------------0---0---2-a----3-1-3-1---0---1---2---2---3-3-0-3-
0-a---------------------------

UnknownNinja: Looks like random numbers in some places. didnt go together well at all. 4/10

Hadji_San: oh so cunning reviews eh? I dont know if you were being a smartass or serious. but here you go. you get what you deserve. Pass! Excellent work. 9/10

-78-: Liked the lead guitar mini solos in there. Liked the ending. 8/10

soodne: (Song1) Lacked lead guitar in my opinion. Overall good 5/10
(Song2) Same as above. only better. 6/10
(Song3) It was short. but it doesnt count against you. this is the best yet 8/10
(Song4) Another short one. Liked the mini solo at the begining. 6/10

All the songs are done the same pretty much. with bass playing most of the time without the lead doing much.

Biology_dude: somewhat like mine at the begining with the 4 rift solo. There was some clashes. I cant say it was the BEST. It was good though 8/10

Cactaur_Jack: Drum and guitars were on different beats in some places. 7/10

No one has yet to tell me what people think about mine yet. please give me feedback.

9-6-9-6-2-6-2-6-2-6--0---06--6-06--2---1---2---0---17-----6--6--2---2---2--
----6-69--c0--c0--10--10--10---5-5-5-3---3---1---1---1---1---bbb3-5-2--2--2
---1---1---1--5--c--a---a---3---3---3---3----2---3-0---3---3---3---3----3--
-3--3----3---3---3----7-8-aa--

I revised it a little.

At 1/31/04 01:35 PM, RobG096 wrote: Biology_dude: somewhat like mine at the begining with the 4 rift solo. There was some clashes. I cant say it was the BEST. It was good though 8/10

Hey 80% 1st try. Not Bad! Thanks for the review bud! I didn't think it was the BEST, I was just being a little arrogant!

Here's a really simple but sweet one It took me a whole 3min. 30some seconds to do. Still worthy of a pass. I call it "I was bored".
Enjoy.

0--0--0---0---0---0---0---0---0---0-----------9---9---9---9---9---0---

0---0---0---9--------0---0---9---9---0---0---4---4---0---0---9---9---0

---0---4---4---0---0---0---b-----------------------------------------------

-a---a---a---a---a----------------------

At 1/29/04 09:00 PM, RobG096 wrote: ----2-------6-6-0-------4-4-4-4-6-6-0-----------6-6---9-----1---1----------
-9-9-9--------0---0---c---2---3-3---------c---2-------4---4---c---7-7-7-7-7
-7-1---666-c--------4-4-6-2-----1---1---a---3-5-3-5-1---1---4-4-4-4-4-4-a--
---------aa----------a--------

It was good. The end could of been a tad better.

5-----2---2---4-1---0----5---5-5--1----888-----2---------0----1----2----5-5
-8888-9-9-4----4---2---3--0---0---04---4---0----7-7-----0----------0----1--
--2----5-5-7-7-c---c3---6-6-6-6-2---0---1----3---3-3--2-2-----7-8--4-4-7-8-
7--0----2-2--3-3-0---0----a-a-

theres my second one....not as good as the first but i think it's ok

imho better then the last ones

song 5)

--5-9-5-3---3--63---------9-----5-1--91---0---0---0---9---3---3---9-5-5----
89--------------------2---2---0-2---2---2---4---4---3-3-4---4---1---5-5-5-5
-7-7-7-7-7-7--------1---1---1---1---1-----1---0---4-4-6-6-6-6-7-6-a---a----
---1---1-------a--------------

At 1/31/04 03:09 PM, soodne wrote: imho better then the last ones

better then those last ones i made, that is:)

00-335865-22114-22144-3-22-3-25588112689-88343884412-00-11----269321269--34
788138463110-13--22252115-2161--22144-3---25432--12216--21-46341-13-----327
42-2652-23678132214712432-22345-2-61---222472-132--1331------1134-66222--57
39987611-2422725-112-------11-

this is one my older sister made....she dident know how to work it right.....i think it sounds like the uber random button what do u think?

Mine kicks ass

----8-8-8-4-0---5-4-1---8-8-8-1----8-8-8-71---0--82---5-4-9---78-8-8-1---4-
1-------9-2-------1---5--1---6-9----4---0---4-4-4----9---1---c7-6-7-3-0----
4---7-8---8---7---------0---1---2-a---3-4-4-7-7-7-1-----------2-3-4-270---1
---a----7-7-2-4-a---a---2-4---

At 1/31/04 01:35 PM, RobG096 wrote: Hadji_San: oh so cunning reviews eh? I dont know if you were being a smartass or serious. but here you go. you get what you deserve. Pass! Excellent work. 9/10

heh i was being sarcastic, thanks man. also yours is pretty neat. i give 8/10.

feel free to say anything

song 6)

8869696-3---3---6-0---1---1---8869696-1---1---19---6-9---4-9-969561-9------
------------3b3b3b3-5-5-7-7-----4---4---63b3b3b3-3-3-3-3-9---9---c----3b3b3
-3----------------------------a---a---3-3-3-3-4-4----a-------3-3-3-3-a-----
7-7-7-2-3-3-3-----------------

UnknownNinja: *revised* it was better 8/10

Biology_dude: (I was bored) yeah i know what u mean. I'm bored when i do this which has been all day so i like listening to others music to pass the time. 7/10

-78-: yeah random. 4/10
*sisters* that gave me a headache. but in a good way. 6/10

soodne: i didnt like the ending much. seemed unfinished. other than that it was perfect. 9/10

Tosoto: guitars werent on the same beat. 6/10

soodne: (song6) geez thats a lot of songs. didnt like it much though 3/10

My songs

I have a song thats called"Wasnt Really Lost" somewhere around the forums and i just realized i acidentally copied someone elses song to my save file. Sorry i actually didnt write it. here it is for someone to claim.
-------------------6-1---2---0---2---------78783---2---5-6-4-780---2---2---
2---779----------------------------1---1---3-0-----b---b-b-b-bbbb0---3-3-1-
--0---0---0---b-----a-a-aaa1-2-1-2-1-2-1---3-3-3-5-4-5-3-7-8-7-8-7-3-4-3-0-
--9-1---4-6-4-6-4-6-4-7-7-a---

At 1/31/04 05:31 PM, RobG096 wrote: -------------------6-1---2---0---2---------78783---2---5-6-4-780---2---2---
2---779----------------------------1---1---3-0-----b---b-b-b-bbbb0---3-3-1-
--0---0---0---b-----a-a-aaa1-2-1-2-1-2-1---3-3-3-5-4-5-3-7-8-7-8-7-3-4-3-0-
--9-1---4-6-4-6-4-6-4-7-7-a---

Rather slow at the begining, the rest was good.

Which one of mine is better?

The last one I made (couple posts up) or this revised one?

9-6-9-6-2-6-2-6-2-6--0---06--6-06--2---1---2---0---777----6--6--2---2---0--
----66699-c0--c0--10--10--10---5-5-5-3---3-3-1---1---1---1---bbb3-5-2--2--2
---1-------1--5bbbc-a-a-a---3---4---3---4----4---4-0---3---4---3---4----3--
-4----4--3---4---3-0-7-8-aaaa-

soodne: Too many 11s for the funny shaped guitar... the ending could have been better... 7/10

Unknownninja: too many blank spots for the guitar.. but it was ok
7/10

Noone said anything about mine?? pfft

0---80--0---889-----5-5555--0--880--1---3---56-81---1---3---885------------
--------------2---2---0---2---3-4--b--5-5-7-7-0---1---2---7-7-4---3-3-6----
----------------------------4-4-8-3-3-1---5-7-8-50---0---1---2-2-5-5-3-35-6
-3-7-6-a----------------------

heres a lil summit of mine

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----------b-b-b-b-bbbb-----0---0---0---1-----b-bb0---2---2----c------------
---------------------------------0---0-------2-2-1---3-3-3-0----------9-a--
------------------------------

boredom

song 7)

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---------------c---cccc----6-6bbbb----c---c-------c------------------------
---------------------------a-------------a--1---8-8-3-3-3-3-a--------------
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