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Looks good, a few bits of anatomy are off, and some emotions seem blank and unrealistic, but overall it shows skill and further potential. Keep up the practice!

good stuff, id really like to see you work it all over in color. 8]

At 9/24/09 09:31 PM, Dalenbourg wrote: Looks good, a few bits of anatomy are off, and some emotions seem blank and unrealistic,

Mind naming anatomy? Other than the hands, I know they're fucked. They're better when I draw large...

But yeah. No emotions, quite.

It's supposed to be that way for this person. She's supposed to look sort of disturbingly doll-like.

And I think I'm finally getting the proportions consistently the way I think of them to be for this character.

I look at some earlier pieces in this thread and think "Oh my God, that's worse than I remember it."

It makes me want to start a new thread, but I already did that restart crap once.

I can never do happiness in practice. Maybe I've never tried, or maybe it's because I'm never really in the right mood to doodle smiles that aren't sultry.

I guess you could call this "Annoyed", "Distracted", or maybe "Nagging".

Hands are off, again. Hard to do little. Some things I erase but can never get right again, or just leave a huge eraser smudge.

theyre good, really good, though some have a lot of construction lines visible, I would say have darker oulines.