Looks good, a few bits of anatomy are off, and some emotions seem blank and unrealistic, but overall it shows skill and further potential. Keep up the practice!

good stuff, id really like to see you work it all over in color. 8]

At 9/24/09 09:31 PM, Dalenbourg wrote: Looks good, a few bits of anatomy are off, and some emotions seem blank and unrealistic,

Mind naming anatomy? Other than the hands, I know they're fucked. They're better when I draw large...

But yeah. No emotions, quite.

It's supposed to be that way for this person. She's supposed to look sort of disturbingly doll-like.

And I think I'm finally getting the proportions consistently the way I think of them to be for this character.

I look at some earlier pieces in this thread and think "Oh my God, that's worse than I remember it."

It makes me want to start a new thread, but I already did that restart crap once.

I can never do happiness in practice. Maybe I've never tried, or maybe it's because I'm never really in the right mood to doodle smiles that aren't sultry.

I guess you could call this "Annoyed", "Distracted", or maybe "Nagging".

Hands are off, again. Hard to do little. Some things I erase but can never get right again, or just leave a huge eraser smudge.

theyre good, really good, though some have a lot of construction lines visible, I would say have darker oulines.

At 11/1/09 08:30 PM, JackDGreatest wrote: theyre good, really good,

Shucks.

though some have a lot of construction lines visible, I would say have darker oulines.

Good point. I do sketch alot, and don't usually bother to make them light enough.

However, my scanner also makes things alot lighter than they actually are.

So....ehhhhh,

Christmas Eve. Joy to the world. Ho ho ho and all.

BG's half assed cause it's not the focus. Overall, I think this picture's eh.

Unfinished.

No, I don't have a thing for Chia pets.

At 12/26/09 05:58 PM, Kurofelis wrote:

No, I don't have a thing for Chia pets.

But it's such a catchy slogan, Ch-ch-ch-chia pets

I saw in a newspaper
it looked almost real.
It was a color picture
of a one-pot chicken meal.

A one pot chicken meal sounds delicious to me right now, since I haven't eaten properly in two fucking days because of a fucking stomach fucking flu virus. It mkaes you puke your guts out if you so much as drink a shot of water. It's much better now, but I'm still hungry as fuck.

This girl doesn't have anything to do with chicken, pot, or one pot chicken meals. She gets killed in one of my stories.

I ate about a pound of bacon and noodles.

Lah.

That scale pattern was a pain in the ass to do.

Club. I should edit the feet, I've never liked drawing feet.

:Anybody want me to color this?

At 1/24/10 07:46 AM, Kurofelis wrote:

Anybody want me to color this?

No?

Fine, then.

Try to color and all your art. Thicken your lines with a pen as well. It will make your art look extremely good.

At 1/24/10 11:01 AM, windowskiller wrote: Try to color and all your art. Thicken your lines with a pen as well. It will make your art look extremely good.

Right. I'm just afraid of fucking up with the pen.

WIP

So, crab demon infection. Anybody want to request what kind of animal/elemental should be next, after I do what I want?

At 1/24/10 07:46 AM, Kurofelis wrote: Club. I should edit the feet, I've never liked drawing feet.

Anybody want me to color this?

can you say, implants, also if that crab demon woman was water elemental, i demand a forest or earth elemental, id like to see what you come up with

At 2/12/10 02:47 PM, ashman112 wrote: earth elemental

Well, I sorta meant it could be animal or just pure element, but okay.

How about sheep?

Or ram, whatever.

Yes, only male sheep/ram have horns this substantial, and they're usually on their heads, but the demon decides how to arrange its growths on its host.

This demon is a male possessing a female, and has decided to enhance her punch. To facilitate the horns, and their eventual further growth, the demon infection has also enlarged her hand.

At 6/11/09 09:05 PM, Kurofelis wrote: If you look far, far back into the mists of time, you'll see that I already have another sketchbook thread.

Those eyes look like utter shit.

At 2/12/10 04:23 PM, Ephi wrote:

At 6/11/09 09:05 PM, Kurofelis wrote: If you look far, far back into the mists of time, you'll see that I already have another sketchbook thread.

Those eyes look like utter shit.

Hey, how about concentrating on the current shit? That drawing's long been trashed in the real world, I don't need critic on that.

I'm not allowed to make a new thread with a better image. At least have the courtesy to read the entire thread before posting.

At 8/4/09 07:01 PM, Kurofelis wrote: A mermaid? In a desert wasteland?

Well, this one's sort of lost.

i actually like this one the best, proportionaly, it's the most accurate.

At 2/12/10 04:23 PM, Ephi wrote:

At 6/11/09 09:05 PM, Kurofelis wrote: If you look far, far back into the mists of time, you'll see that I already have another sketchbook thread.

Those eyes look like utter shit.

is that what passes for a crit nowadays, constructive criticism dude, tell em how to improve not just give a blank statement of your disapproval, and now in response so does your mum

Colored and finished. I need to learn how to actually draw feet, but, eh.

Better version in portal.

Your stuff is really cool. I want to see more from you. I like your style and the uniqueness of you r characters. Keep it up!

Believe it or not, traps and scantily clad women are not what I prefer to draw. Any sex appeal of my own drawings does not work on me, so it's really only for attention.

Of course, nobody seems to like character design of a suicidal short girl with a feline puppet that blesses her with the power to not die.

As long as he's connected to her through that cross, that is.

I'M GONNA RIP OFF LIKE FIVE PEOPLE AND STREAM OKAY THANKS.

Gonna be trying to color some Dr. Barber. Mmm, yeeesss...

Also requests.

At 3/14/10 09:26 PM, Felis wrote: I'M GONNA RIP OFF LIKE FIVE PEOPLE AND STREAM OKAY THANKS.

Also, this was ultrafail.

So no more failing in that respect is going to be done. Ever.

I don't know what is this.

At 6/22/09 10:10 PM, Felis wrote: Having no suggestions or constructive criticism is sort a bummer.

maybe there is nothing to say about them? they look like fucking vomit heads are tiny (don't even try to make excuses about style because no matter what the fucking heads are to tiny)
they all look the same only different posing, you can't colour for shit, study more anatomy and proportions of a human body, start here. http://www.icrit.org/resources.html
start from scratch if you want to improve.

At 3/25/10 05:17 PM, majkas wrote: maybe there is nothing to say about them? they look like fucking vomit heads are tiny (don't even try to make excuses about style because no matter what the fucking heads are to tiny)
they all look the same only different posing, you can't colour for shit, study more anatomy and proportions of a human body, start here. http://www.icrit.org/resources.html
start from scratch if you want to improve.

i just love looking at your posts, theyre so helpful to the artists, seriously grow a pair dude :3

At 3/25/10 05:22 PM, Ashman wrote:

At 3/25/10 05:17 PM, majkas wrote: maybe there is nothing to say about them? they look like fucking vomit heads are tiny (don't even try to make excuses about style because no matter what the fucking heads are to tiny)
they all look the same only different posing, you can't colour for shit, study more anatomy and proportions of a human body, start here. http://www.icrit.org/resources.html
start from scratch if you want to improve.

i just love looking at your posts, theyre so helpful to the artists, seriously grow a pair dude :3

oh fucking great i have a stalker on my ass, maybe i am honest and try actualy to help people? sayng good about bad drawings isn't going to help them out in anny way.