Haha, I hope you don't expect me to work on it anymore. I noticed that the saw was a semitone above the rest of the song, but I actually liked that. I really loathe the resonance on the saw filter, which is just annoying. No, screw that, not annoying, PAINFUL. Literally. I might edit that out, but like I said, I really can't be stuffed working on it anymore; it's finished, and... um...
Yeah.

Edit: I just had another listen,, and it's so horribly mastered I actually want to go back and look at it. So I will.

OK, I was wondering why everybody hated it. I personally thought it was more the drums that clashed, as they were much louder than the rest of the song and tended to overpower it all. The "synth", in my opinion didn't really clash with the piano, but flowed along with it, in a paddish way. I kind of see what you meant with the saw, though. I just thought of a little tune one day (at the zoo, actually, though I doubt that really had much effect) and had to get it out. Now I have, and everybody hates it, so... Well, the only really good thing I got out of this was the saw, which, while it clashes, can be used well in other songs that are more my style. (You can download that saw now, from my user page, if yo* want to use it.) I don't really want to have another attempt, as I can't really see this song sounding good, especially as it's not my style. Thanks for the review though, and I'm happy to hear what you don't like about my music because it helps me do a better job of it.
Wow, I wrote heaps. Ah well.

Thanks for the review, I guess. :/
ND

*Edit: Lol, I said yo.