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1st trk in ova 3 mths, have i still got it, thx to wintang for inspiring me. hope u enjoy

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Average Score: 9.2 / 10

Score: 10

"Ahhhh!!!"

by: stringfire

date: April 8, 2008

I am now an official fan...:D great soothing work!

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Score: 9

"very nice"

by: pisces27

date: August 28, 2007

i find this song very relaxing.lol. its also really pretty. :)

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Score: 8

"Nice"

by: GayForFags

date: August 20, 2007

I don't know alot of this genre listen more to grunge, rock and punk but i like the song.^^ i'll give u an 8/10

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Score: 9

"its very..."

by: Chronamut

date: April 27, 2007

minimalistic? I like the effect in the b/g - ah there its picking up now - I like the atmosphere - its very calming but still holds substance. A few peaking errors here and there but I wont hold that against ya - altho the strings on the right side tend to tilt the stereo a bit - the effects that come in on the left fix that tho later on-its just a bit of an awkward transition that way. So ya apart from some problems in production the song is very cool - the buildups are good and for all the layering nothing really sounds crowded so I commend you for that ^^

percussion could be a tad sharper tho but I think thats just a personal preference :) also some more flowing soundscapes might have polished it off in the end when you can feel there should be something filling the remaining gaps in the stereo field.

other than that good job - you're coming along nicely!

-shawn-

Author's Response:

Haha yea, it doesn seem very empty first of all in this track, but i think it slowly draws you in. Yea this track is full of production errors, click tracks, poor guitar recordings, but i think it lends the tracks abit of warmth.

about filling in the soundfield...it's really hard to decide when things are too much, or too little, if i embellish i may push it too far. what most of my tracks need tho are vocals, imo it's like i've set up the template and am just waititng for a singer to fnish it off. maybe thats what this track needs. very much taken on board tho mate. let me know when you have any more up.

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Score: 9

"Cool."

by: Slayer-of-trolls

date: February 24, 2007

Nice. Your music is very melancholy. I think you could fill it out more in the beginning a little more . I would like to put a solo over this or something. I think it could use something extra but that's just me...

Author's Response:

I don't know whether i'd personally call my tunes melancholic, but then again each of us interprets music differently. Yea the opening is intentionally sparse, a tune of wintangs got me going and that was pretty empty too. A solo would be cool on this track somewhere. where to put it would be the problem. cheers tho mate.