Well to start off, I didn't really like how it started off. The instruments sound really fake, which is probably not your fault if you don't have access to more realistic sounding instruments, but it only helps to bring the rest of the peace down. At around 2:40 (and every other time that part plays) I hear a sort of, anti-harmony with some of the notes... lol, Not sure if you meant it to be that way or not. I think there could have been parts with percussion too. Keep working at it though!