*starts song : DIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIING DOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONG......*
too loud....
you made the dongs too loud for the song itself, but the rythm comes as the song cotinues and noise level stabilyze... thing i don't like is the changes in the "flux" of the song, i mean each time you start a new "rise up" after a drop is leaded by the DENG DONG loud sound....
to my point of view, and i'm not a music maker, i'm not a "real" music fan etc but I think i have good ears ; so to my point, it's not a well done song, it's nicely catchy but still i think there're a lot improvements to do !
work on it, mid the noise lvl, work on the developement of the track and send it back there !