Lovely lyrics. The singing is quite good, but I think I could appreciate it more with fewer effects. The pitch was also off in a few places (beginning of the chorus, mainly). You also enunciated "shit" a bit too much, but that's really just me.
Chorus is fantastic. The guitar fits really well with the song in general. Light percussion is great.
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This is based on a true story. Found out that the girl I was with was cheating...nearly crashed my car!
Ceevro responds:
I agree with your assessment...I was worried about my pitches in this one. I've since come up with a better way to do harmonies and get my notes exactly right. This one was done the natural way - singing the chorus, and then singing a second track overtop of it. I think I do better if I have the actual notes pre-planned. Lessons in not winging things, eh?
And 'shit' is actually a pretty hard word to blend, vocally. Try it for yourself. There is only one actual sung sound, and the rest is whispered, and sounds harsh. Like a single word of Klingon in the middle of High French. I actually chose it for that specific reason: It almost attacks the listener. For singing, it's a better cuss than 'fuck,' impact-wise.
bullshit.
Ceevro responds:
Fuck you too.
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