Loops! I think you should take pride in the fact that your loops do so almost perfectly. Not many musicians can say that.
This one sounds extremely eerie, with some really cool sound effects. The main melody, played by some sort of theremin-like instrument, sounds really nice with the rest of the song. The background strings and the rest of the ambient, reverb-heavy stuff create a really nice atmosphere.
You say you were practicing your bass? Well, I think you should probably make it louder. I could barely hear it as it is, with everything else going on around it. Although, from what I heard, it sounded fine.
I can easily see how this was based off of Elitistinen (except for the fact that it was so short :P ). I keep thinking you two know each other from outside the website or that you're both Finnish or something since you have such similar DPs.
It doesn't suck completely! I wish it was longer. You know, come to think of it, the melody does sound 3/4. Strange.
This song belongs under bluegrass. EVERY SONG IS BLUEGRASS.