10-4-14
This song is now called 7 Berettas. It'll be released on the upcoming Random Acts of Flyness mixtape.
Check it out at http://teqneek.bandcamp.com
Beat by Ebon Hawk.
LYRICS:
I'm gonna live to be a thousand and ten
Imma hybrid, cybernetic with a robot head
Handle my business til the end because Teq gonna still hustle
And win eleven championships like I'm Bill Russell
Was the best before, now I'm an ass load better
This entitles me to be the biggest ass hole ever
Since I figured out my homies are really only competitors
I'm taking on the role of the intellectual predator
I need a bunch of people criticizing and hating me
Like I took a vacation from being dope and amazing
But dope and amazing is hopeless when you growin impatient
And sick of no recognition and getting totally anxious
I'm saying everyone's an emcee and it's pissing me off
And if this is the business model then the business is flawed
This isn't a riddle, the listeners are listenin' wrong
And I'm second-guessing to the point where I can't finish a song
So fuck it- no longer doin' it for money and fame
I'm in the game to entertain and to remain sane-
(and I'm losin' but) I'm doin' this so I don't change my mind
And feed you seven Berettas so I can say you ate nines
Notbad
And here was something I really enjoyed even as different as it is you still made it fun and not boring bringing something different to the table each time and this one was no exception as it was pretty solid and some decent quality of sound so nice job on this and hope you make more like this always a pleasure
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just make it a tad longer seemed somewhat short
~X~
Dope, love the diction and flow.
Will be waitin for the reupload
- Qwaint
That was cool bruv. I really dig your style, hustle and flow, to put it in a different way. haha.
Who did the beat?
Thanks dude! The beat was made by Ebon Hawk (credited in description, and I sent him a contributor credit thing, but he's disappeared from the face of the Earth.
The first two lines didn't really sync, but after that everything flows perfectly, and the seven eight nines are a fun finale. I'm thinking maybe you could breath in more and add some volume to your voice though? Either way this is great, good beat, no filler lyrics, great track! And yeah the musical industry is hard to get into, it's the dream life with demand for only a selected few so of course there's tons of competition. Keep it going though!
-cd-
Thanks for the review man, I appreciate the advice!
As a matter of fact, I'm presently in the process of rewriting and re-recording this track, and improving a lot of things.
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CHANGES TO BE MADE:
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A rewrite and re-recording of verse one (More Energy, More Clarity, Less Braggadocio), complete with some sweet-ass rhyme revisions!
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A second verse will be added!
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The hook will be re-recorded!
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The instrumental will be tweaked to sound better!
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MAY speed the beat up a little
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tl;dr: REMAKE DROPPIN' SOON SOON!
Why is six afraid of seven? It wasn't. Numbers are not sentient and thus incapable of feeling fear.
Just like you're incapable of putting up a whack song on here. Although you should definitely continue to do it for the money and fame. My groupies are all that keep me going.
Whatever dawg- my track 'Lotion And Doo-Doo' won a whole dang contest for being wack!
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