This is becoming somewhat of a habit.

..reviewing, that is.

Alright, once again, not your melodies, so I'll have to critique other things. First lead sounds like a square lead, kinda generic, but I still like them.
I personally don't like the lead at 0:10, sounds overbearing and irritating. You might like it yourself, I don't. Two differencing opinions.
0:27 is random compared to the rest of the song, the two don't go well together. The little gaps in the beat are nice though. Bass sounds iffy though, needs to be a fuller bass.
Alright, incorporating previous elements of the piece at 0:50, its a good thing to do, albeit the fact that I dislike that particular synth.

A change to a saw running the main melody, can't critique the melody, once again. I personally don't like the melody though.
Err, lead seems overpowering compared to the backing beat, the bass is a bit plain too.

Ehh, nothing too new or too interesting here, the transitions still need a little bit of patching up and the beats need to be a little less, plain?
Psssh, well thats my review, I haven't said too much, but oh well. I cannot stress how important it is to actually make your own melodies once in a while though.

-Mr.MeD