Eeeh.

Hey, I'm some kind of magical virus, all the songs I review are deleted!

Piano is a bit high pitched, needs some EQ'ing, or just to be turned down an octave.
Generic kick n bass part. Can't really say much, kinda bland. Gets repetitive.

Saw melody comes in, really loud to begin with. Bit overbearing.
Then it gets toned down. (is it being sidechained or something?)

Overall, it's a bit repetitive, bland to say it.
Piano needs eome fixing, and transitions are just a sweep. (Hell, we're all guilty of that at one stage.)

Still, I'm hoping you actually took some of that advice to heart before you deleted all your older tracks.
(6/10 for repetitiveness, general lack of interest.)

-Mr.MeD

nice rhythm n beat

i would just suggest switching things up from the norm. if the vocals are added it would be much better though!! sweet