Covers and remixes are all good fun, but you should still make your own melodies from time to time.
I can't technically review anything in terms of the melody as it is not yours. I think the intro kick needs to be turned down a little bit.
0:28 saw comes in randomly, maybe a little bit of a transition?
0:54 starts that generic dance pattern again. A little gaps here and there to prevent it from being too repetitive.
1:48 is good in the fact that you're merging previous sections of the songs together.
Nothing too new to be honest, the melody isn't yours so I can't even critique that. It's got a decent flow, just a few transitions need to be fixed up. And repetition is a little bit of an issue again.
Try adding variation, or just make your own melodies and variate with them.
Still, its nicely sounding, but it IS repetitive, it gets a wee bit boring after awhile.
Either way, keep it up.
You only get better with practice.
Thanks. I only did this song to get some practice and get a nice feedback on improving. Do you know where I can get a lot of transitions and vocal effects?
Must say I enjoyed this, the mastering was good.
It's always a satisfying feeling learning new skills ;D
keep it up. :)
Btw, check out my newest track if you could, and maybe comment? xD
Thank you a lot! I will check it out right now. =p
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.