Cool idea

I like the piano progression that comes in at the second half of the song. And all the instruments mix together well, however, what I've noticed about this song (and a few others as well), is that it's pretty obvious that you use Fruity Loops. At least to a committed FL user. The keys are plain and dry; I'm assuming you just use the default setting. If you do, you should avoid that. Mess with the knobs, and even EQ it, and you can hide it pretty easily. Otherwise, all the /FL/tards will jump all over you and harsh your ratings. Also, it sounds like most of the instruments are pretty dry. Effects are the key, my friend. Add some flavor!