sorry

I didnt really like this song so much, so brace yourself.

The quality of the sound is pretty low grade, i read this was the first thing you made with this program, so you should proly experiment with the equalization and instruments in that program.

As far as the music itself goes, I felt the song was boring. There wasn't anything to really hold on to, by that i mean something you could go walk away and whistle. I felt no real direction with the piece, no build up, no real tension, no resolution. That all may just be my taste tho.

The synth and weird effects you used didnt make me happy either. they just kind of annoyed me. didnt feel like it fit with the music, didn't set a tone, and if you were trying to set an ambience or what, but I didnt get it.

Also it sounds like it almost cuts off and restarts at one point.

There are alot more things I could say but i'll just really keep it to myself since I think this song needs ALOT of work to improve.

Sry bro, just being honest.