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Mar 25, 2010 | 9:20 PM EDT
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7.4 MB
5 min 25 sec
2.26 / 5.00

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Rated 2.26 / 5 stars
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Warrior goes into battle and may not come out alive... this one dosn't. my 4th submission hope you like it. (constuctive) criticism is welcome



Rated 0.5 / 5 stars

Some battle!

What are they fighting with? Flowers?


Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

definitely not a warriors saga.

There are about a few dozen little things im gonna leave out, because there are so many larger problems with this song right now, that those wouldn't even matter. However, I'll list a few that I hear as I listen to it a few times.

First of all the majority of the beats you have going stress the wrong parts of the beats alot of the time.

You just switch instruments waaaaay too often, suddenly, and it makes it feel very "thrown together.

There are almost no fade ins, no fade outs, and despite having this many different instruments, you hardly ever have more then 3 going at once. This suggests that you too many unorganized ides.

The various chords early on are harsh

The bells at 2:15 are dissonent without being resolved, solo dissonence is very bad.

The switch from bells to guitar/organ is very akward since it doesn't share a similar theme with the bells at all, it's completly contrasted, and even when it actaully comes all the way in, it fades away, it felt like wasted time.

The hit at 3:30 leads to nothing, it's just a hit to hit.

Whats with the weird fade at 3:19?

At 4:27 those riffs are completly out of the blue, have nothing to do with anything, and doesn't really go with that main theme you've got going the whole time, and like most of the other parts of your song, fade away immediatly and suddenly.

I have alot more things I can say, but there are waaaay too many things to just go on and list and list.

So here are the big picture things.

You have your main idea theme which comes in early, and you have it stay until the end. That would be fine, however,

It never develops, changes, alters, stacks, or does anything but repeat itself. You can't do that in a song nearly as long as yours.

You have WAY too many random things going on without development, a coherent line, or familiarity. Also, they just jump in, with no leading into them at all, they don't tie to the main theme, or to each other at all, melodically, harmonically, rhythmically, they aren't even in a similar instrument family. It ends up feeling like a bunch of different songs not related at all crammed into 5 minutes.

Whenever you create dissonance, it doesn't resolve.

about 80% of the time it definitly doesn't feel like a warriors saga. It feels more like the bakers saga, his wifes saga, the dragons saga, the janitors saga, and some random guys saga all at the same time.

In short, you need more organization and musical relationships between all the parts you've shoved into one song before this can even begin to work.

I may come off as harsh or rude, but I AM trying to HELP you. Redo this song with what i've said in mind, resubmit it, and let e know when you do, then we can work out little details like the dozens i've neglected to mention.

If it makes you feel better, you can always visit my songs and give them honest reviews.

Remake, and let me know when you do so i can come check it out again.

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