Good menu tune
I think that there needs to be some work on the melody here, as when you get the two parts of the tune playing over one another, the notes just seem to clash and it gets a little ugly, but other than that, I can see that there's a good tune basis for this piece.
I'm not too sure about the ending to the piece, as it gets away from the feeling of being in the same place that the start and middle felt like. Those pieces of the tune all felt as if they belonged, but the ending sounded like a little random experimentation that probably shouldn't have made it past the editing, I'm sorry to say.
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