the first 30 seconds went surprisingly well, in those 30 seconds i only made one very small mistake too, the intro is really my favorite part
and im really working hard to make myself better so that i can more easily let my feeling flow into the notes, i only just started, but now im a lot better then when i played this already

and the thing is, after choosing the scale to play in... i just simply played and recorded the first try
this is the first and only time i played it, so i didnt practice this piece at all
improvising is just playing out of the blue without giving yourself enough time to think about it
if i had practiced then there would be almost no mistakes, but i first want to rewrite the melody before that, taking the good parts and rewrite the bad ones, but i havent had really the time for it though

thanks!!!

every time i started thinking of the next part to play or noticed i made a mistake and some other reasons i made some small breaks... those breaks ruined it as a song, have it flow nicely is maybe more important then the right notes...

and i dont believe in the existence of a soul, but i do understand what you mean, i see it more as putting my feelings directly into the music
every time i listen to this i can fully re-feel the feelings its based on, a slight fear and sadness that im trying to fight against with hope while trying to regain my calm

and i do like this piece too and really believe it has potential... but its just a fact that giving the song the right meaning is my only true accomplishment (thats the most important thing for me though) because the tempo is in some parts really screwed up, didnt hold the right rithm (in same parts it strengthens the feelings by that though) many bad notes, not a complicated song and in a simple scale
so if you expect to find something great then it is a big disappointment, but if the feelings a song represent is more important to you then it can still be a beautiful song to listen to even though its simple with a lot of mistakes
if i didnt like it enough then i wouldnt have uploaded it either
apparently you are one of the people who find the same thing the base of music, the feelings/soul of the artist

and i even believe i am going to be a great musician too (probebly wont make it to the big public though and i wont be a professional for a long time...)
i have a lot of motivation and i notice my impovement each time, my piano teacher is frequently surprised by what i can play already too (only need to practice the basics instead of songs more)
i am not going to make a living by making music, i have something better, i live for my music :P

with full appreciation of your support!

kill4peace

thanks a lot for the great review!!! really!!!
for having someone who plays piano saying that i have potential makes me really motivated

its a 100% made by me, my piano teacher havent even heard this piece yet
beyond that point i made much more mistakes indeed, the first notes went really surprisingly well :P and it wasnt hard at that moment, all notes i played came by so logical when i simply played, only trying the same song again is not that easy, i dont even recall the scale again either (and i didnt fully stay in the same scale i believe)... and i need to be in the right mood, have a lot of inspiration and some luck to do a successful improvisation again, until now this is my only success

Johanne Sebastian Bach has some nice songs, i only know a very few at the moment so the simplest song of him i heard is 'jesu, joy of mans desiring' which im trying to play already because i like it so much, its quite hard at my current level though but my piano teacher was amazed that in such short time i had been able to make a real start at a piece like that again, its way further then my piano book tells me i am and i seem to learn faster then most of his other piano students, guess im just more motivated to learn to play though
i sounds really interesting to look for some more songs from bach (and there are indeed a few bachs), guess ill look up some more from him soon

Czerny is a unknown name for me though, i am going to check him out too to check if i might want to play (or just simply listen to) his songs too

and i dont NEED to become a proffecional, im happy as long as i can express my feelings through music... but it would be very nice if i become good at making music... after all there are a lot of goals that would be fun to reach with music... and once im good at the piano i might go play cello, so if i hurry up a little i can move on to the next instrument and do some more with music again :P

kill4peace

tetris, thats one hell of a hard piece to play i think (not to mention on a VERY HIGH speed) xD
for me its one of my best decisions to buy a piano, you do like pianos a lot, so it is something you could seriously think about...
only it aint cheap and consumes a lot of time (but if you really think you want one then my only advice is not to buy a keyboard but a digital piano, they play a lot different... and i have heard a lot of people wanting to play the piano and buy a keyboard instead because they are cheaper and then soon enough they get bored and stop playing)