this is the first hour of work that i have done. this is the non loop version.
the theme of this song is procrastination, because the harp reminds me of a metronome at the start.
any criticisms? let me know!
BTW, this is still not finished, so don't comment about the shortness, or lack of melody, thats not really my forte. i prefer to make backing tracks, like this!
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ver. 2. i added a couple of instruments, and finally added a melody, for viola, of all instruments!
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I think you could add one more flute on the flute melody after a few time. Maybe some cymbals if you want it more epic :P. You could put another melody into it. Your song would last longer and be even more interesting. Your song is great, I like it.
yeah, sure! anything is possible with this song!
thank you for commenting, next time i get a chance to work on it, i'll take these into consideration!
not bad :)
You could do some more work into it. I prefer adding percussion instruments. That is only my liking but overall this has potential.
thank you for commenting! i will add percussion eventually, but i had only done about an hours work on it!
percussion... hmmm... that is a lot harder, because all of it is done through a midi keyboard, and not a good one either. i think i'll need to brush up on it, but thats a perfectly good point!
whats your opinion on my other song, life as it were?
Very nice start =]
Promising, keep it up. It could use more instruments and have a bit more different kind of parts, if you know what I mean =]
thank you for your comment! i hope to add more instruments to it eventually!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
rb10c 
