please comment, but do not be offensive please! it is only my first piece! i also made this about 8 months ago, but didnt get a chance to upload it! i will be uploading le onde duet with cello, and this composition with my teacher doing improv on a trumpet.
as for your first piece
great job! :D but i also noticed that some notes are out of beat.. or it's just me.. AND yes it gets a little bit repetitive.. if you could do more variations of this. :) In the same way storm FX somewhat effective and tells us the meaning of the song.
thank you for your review! i think a couple of the notes were out of synch, but i cant change it now...
oh well! i'll just keep this in mend and make suyre it doesn't happen in future tracks!
Will I be the first one to comment on such a...
Masterpiece? Fantastic job, my friend, catchy rythm (specially for a classical song) and nice range of instruments (I really liked the flute and the storm effects). Well, the song get a little repetitive, but this isn't even near enough to make this piece less brilliant. Thank you for this awesome song, I'm looking forward to your next music.
thank you very much for your review. i will eventually re-release this, but hopefully slightly better! i hope i can count on you to review that too!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
rb10c 
