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Nice opening melody; it's pretty long, although essentially is the same thing repeated twice; you probably could avoid repetition by just changing a note in the second half of the melody and making the loop feel twice as long.
There's a nice bunch of synths, though it sounds like it gets a lot quieter 1:00-1:12 for no reason; as if you just turned the volume knob down a little, which was a little weird. It was probably done to keep up the variety? But it just sounds like an accident, to be frank. As well as that, by 1:30 the initial melody did feel quite stale. If you're going to carry a melody for that long without any pause, you need to change the backing synth up a lot more, or change the synth itself, just to keep the variety up more. You do that at around the 2 minute mark, but as you've already have 120 seconds of the same thing, it feels drag-y even if it is relatively interesting when compared to the rest of the track.
An easy way to fix this would be to have a second melody, so you could change between the two and have different sections of the song. Another could be to have a slower, more ambient section with pad synths, or taking out and putting in more synths in transitions. For a third submission, this is alright. But you still have to get variety down, in the melodic or structural way (maybe even both), before your tracks can start getting really polished. Keep it up, though.
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