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Apr 8, 2010 | 4:05 AM EDT
File Info
3.6 MB
3 min 8 sec
4.28 / 5.00

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.

Rated 4.28 / 5 stars
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Author Comments

This is my second song that I have submitted here. Took me about 4 hours (throughout the week). I made it completely in FL9 with Toxic Biohazard, Vanguard, and VCE.



Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

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I had no problem with the volume, but then again my volume's always cranked to the top so it could just be me xD

0:00-Intro's nice, sets up the song well.
0:08-The bass is alright, but doesn't always completely seem to relate to the synth, or at least not as much as it could do. Drums are simple, but effective. Like the cymbal crescendos when they're around
0:31-Alright transition into new lead; could be better, but is fine as it is.
0:49-Transition again. Always good to mix it up like you're dong to try and keep variety up, especially when you only have the two main ideas to juggle about.
1:34 that being said, you need more than just switching between the two, especially as the ideas themselves are only 4 bars long or so. By here it starts to drag a little.
1:59-Nice mingling of the two ideas together, works well; wouldn't have minded seeing more of that previously in the track

A little too long for the material; as sixflab said, change up the instruments. You've got the startings of structural variety, now just complexify it a little more; maybe have a more ambient section in the middle. Havin a few pads in the background would also help give this song a lot of depth.

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yours31f responds:

Thanks a ton. I have been working privately to try to increase my skills in melody, synth creation and modulation and have been learning to make a more in depth track. I plan to post a new one soon but I am not happy with it yet.


Rated 3 / 5 stars

Increase volume

-The volume on this is dreadfully low. I'm using headphones and it is difficult to hear unless I crank the volume up a lot.

-The overall melody is upbeat and has a lot of bass in the background to help it progress nicely throughout. I would suggest adding more variety to it though. Adding some synths or pads into the mix would be a great example of improving this song and giving it more variety.

-Your still in the beginning stages and you show promise since you know your way around the program that you are using. Just add more variety into your work and it will sound so much better.

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