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Uploaded
Mar 5, 2010 | 4:11 PM EST
File Info
Song
1.7 MB
1 min 31 sec
Score
4.14 / 5.00

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Score:
Rated 4.14 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
502 Plays | 33 Downloads
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Genres:
Electronic - Techno
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Author Comments

Just to let others know, i made this during klass in about 30 mins. it's simple and i had a lot of ditraktions while making it BUT i like it, i didnt have time to rework the sounds of the instruments or korrekt their volume. but i think it kame out okay, although i wish i kould have made it a LOT better.

and i kan now tell im improving! i learned how to use the piano roll! ha.

Reviews


shesmackshardshesmackshard

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Hmmm

This is actually a pretty good melody. I wont focus much on the EQ on this review, but moreso some effects (like the guy below me mentioned)

The compressor goes a long way, but personally I use a Limiter way more. I wouldnt throw it on the kicks either.

If you're using FLS, do this for a suggestion:
Go to the master mixer channel, and where it has the default limiter, click it, and right click the arrows top right, and click Drum Compression 2 (I use this sometimes).

Then adjust levels after you hear what this affect does.

On the synth, it might be cool to add a sidechain.
FLS > Mixer > Gross beat > Sidechain (bottom left).

The compressor and the sidechain work well together.

Some quick ideas. Theres tons of stuff you can do here.

For one further suggestion, you should definitely consider a bassline. The typical "in-between-kick" bassline would work, as seen in some of my songs, like on my Breakdown in "Emineye".

Cool stuff though. You're a good writer, now to put that to work in collaboration with some learning on production and mixing. Stay at it.

Out of the 3 ive heard of yurs, this has the most potential for SURE.
And for that, 10/10 5/5. Like seriously, its not an amazing track (this is no secret) but I cant help but give a high score because I can personally hear a LOT of potential in this sequence.


KranBerries responds:

i appresiate the review man, and i think imma start a word file kalled, smaks notes! lol and the bassline thing, im kindof konfused as to what that really is so when i figure it out and view a few tut's i should be able to fix them up more :D


IIPhaseIIPhase

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Drumms sound needs some compression

Nice melodies but it needs some work.
You should look into putting a compressor on your drumms.
And read some tutorials on that.
It would get you a more proffesional drum sound.
All rhythms are there but it it will help getting the sound you here in the club

8/10
4/5


KranBerries responds:

Good! i'll look up some tut's right away and thanks for the review :D
i JUST found a kompressor in the demo ha im really new to this so your help is very thanked! :)